Veil so thin - AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Gospel and Indie Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice) 30 April 2026
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS
I transformed this original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for an AI-generated song using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the AI-generated musical version.
## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM
This poem considers a world where love and truth are mistaken for weakness, and the alter ego that forms when one cannot reconcile such a world with their own principles.
She was freed Twice in a neat row The bluebirds They sang so Their beaks memories of honey The bees had gathered
[Verse] She was freed twice in a neat row The bluebirds, they always sang so their beaks memories of honey the bees had gathered in plenty I flew high keeping company with her wings’ leading symphony We move in skies with pale phantoms The moon witness to lost anthems
[Verse] We all die before we can live but desolation I forgive My years stretch into skies’ rainbows yet my heart loves Earth’s green meadows As with just sleeping, beauty fades We may exchange the hearts for spades breathe within shadows, count the cost yet the true love is never lost
[Chorus] Fleeting Time, I gather in hands rubbing oil through snakes’ kin’s demands filtered true which people think false the best hiding place for all faults Falsehoods hide under Veil so thin they are targets floating within We discover but what we choose the rest we give up and let loose
[Verse] The night’s kiss, a tale of lovers A story of darkened clovers now clubbed to death by the wit game In love we sometimes place the shame Nothing moves as I face winds still just sit around my window sill The wind is dead cold, the breath warm I gaze and feel the tired bees swarm
[Verse] Flies hover, suspended wings gleam Tomorrows sullen noise may seem Picking up the new mornings din I imbibe it, soak it in skin It vibrates, snakes crawl up my spine the sun troubling the dream divine We were free once upon a rhyme when teeth clicked tight shut against dime
[Chorus] Fleeting Time, I gather in hands rubbing oil through snakes’ kin’s demands filtered true which people think false the best hiding place for all faults Falsehoods hide under Veil so thin they are targets floating within We discover but what we choose the rest we give up and let loose
## 🎧 AI SONG
Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:
### 🎸 Blues version A blues interpretation emphasising raw emotion and expressive character. Veil so thin – AI Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🎬 Cinematic version A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity. Veil so thin – AI Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🙏 Gospel version A gospel-inspired version focusing on expressive phrasing and spiritual depth. Veil so thin– AI Gospel Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🌿 Indie version An indie interpretation with a softer, reflective tone, incorporating Asian instruments for a distinctive sound. Veil so thin – AI Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS
This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno AI, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Blues, Cinematic, Gospel and Indie influences.
Flow the Kiss (AI Suno song using my voice and my lyrics) 8 April 2026
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[Verse] We twirl slow, your arms a fortress encircling, cajoling caress the curving brown valleys and peaks shoulders my bastion the heart seeks
[Verse] Twitching fingers beat rhythmical on my waist, your touch magical Haunting lips honey’s taste lingers as I kiss angelic singers
[Verse] Empress of your heart, hands waving Hips twirling, heart, body craving Belly dance, tango, all unite just to my dancing feet’s delight
[Chorus] Lazy wake, the suns now shimmer flushed the cheek though light goes dimmer The souls lost in time flow the Kiss waking up to the morning bliss
[Verse] I sway for your eyes ecstasy twirling to your low melody of the simmering heartbeats’ glee warm glows’ diffusion into me
[Verse] Come lover, I know of a dance Of moonshine and ravens that prance where dark and silver’s dilation slow unfold into love’s fusion
[Verse] Follow me, I will lead your step a move so light no need to schlep so wild at heart dance to the beat passion extreme, just feel the heat
[Chorus] Lazy wake, the suns now shimmer flushed the cheek though light goes dimmer The souls lost in time flow the Kiss waking up to the morning bliss
[Verse] With Heart’s illusion sparks ignite bodies’ confusion spreads the light Seven steps into the bushes threaded heat now rushing gushes
[Verse] The silent heat screams, listen deep It makes day dreams so lose the sleep Leave this world, hear my body’s words I will darken your bright eyes’ sherds
[Verse] The heart a hammer now lie weak Your darkened eyes rhyme, do not speak In golden morrows take a walk our hands cast in mime ne’er to talk
[Chorus] Lazy wake, the suns now shimmer flushed the cheek though light goes dimmer The souls lost in time flow the Kiss waking up to the morning bliss
“Flow the Kiss” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Blues
“Flow the Kiss” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Cinematic
“Flow the Kiss” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Gospel
Prayers of the days, struggle of illusions 19 February 2025
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Translation of a poem in Arabic that I wrote on 15 May 2011 and that I had never translated before. I am providing below the English translation the original poem with a small correction. There are probably other small grammatical errors that I would not have noticed.The previous poem was published here دعاء الأيام، كفاح ألأوهام | Geetha Balvannanathan's Blog - Isis Tratum
If only I were a scream to flirt with your lips as I rise from them springing free, forgetting silence
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If only I were a rock to roll between your hands as I oppose your ways against happiness resilient, bound, committed to stillness
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If only I were a chick to hide between your wings as I look out from them satisfied and calm, yours until I die
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If only I were pride to support the pulse between your ribs as I help you store the air a loyal owner, extracting sorrows
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Today, from your rib I am renewed, a sorceress, Eve and from my rib, none can remove you neither past grudges nor annihilation
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I am the scream of the steadfast rock so forget, Sisyphus, that I should roll I am the pride of the chick for its mother my days' tears flowed like rivers
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I am every mother who called in the dark the stones were shattered by my screams I am what escaped the death of dreams the wells filled with the blood of my veins
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Look to the oncoming spring for it bears the seed of my flowers Put on the garment of the regretful autumn for it is too late to oppress me
دعاء الأيام، كفاح الأوهام 2011-05-15
ليتني صرخة كي أغازل شفتيك و أنا أرتفع منهما منطلقة حرَة ناسية السُكوت
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ليتني صخرة كي أتكركب بين يديك و أنا أعارض طرقك ضدَ الهناء صامدة مقيَدة ملتزمة بالسُكون
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ليتني فرخ كي أتخبَأ بين جناحيك و أنا أطلُ منها راضية هادئة، لك إلى أن أموت
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ليتني فخر أساند النَبض بين ضلعيك وأنا أساعدك على تخزين الهواء مالكة وافية منتزعة للشجون
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أنا اليوم من ضلعك تجدَدت ساحرة حوَاء و من ضلعي ما أمكن نزعك لا الحقد الماضي و لا الفناء
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أنا صرخة الصخرة الصَامدة فإنس يا سيزيف أن أستدار أنا فخر الفرخ للأم الوالدة سال دمع أيامي سيل الأنهار
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أنا كل أم نادت في الظلام تحطمت بصرختي الأحجار أنا ما نجى من موت الأحلام إمتلأت بدم عروقي الآبار
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أنظر إلى الربيع القادم فهو يحمل زرع زهري إرتد ثوب الخريف النادم فقد فات الأوان عن قهري
Reading of the translation in English of the original Arabic poem:
Reading of the original Arabic poem (most likely with some grammar mistakes)
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