A deathly pallor – AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Gospel Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice) 2 May 2026
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS
I transformed this original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for an AI-generated song using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the AI-generated musical version.
## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM
This poem explores the unravelling of a self, shaped by excessive forgiveness, and the rebuilding required to become someone who no longer offers the other cheek..
Night’s sky breathed aloud Jasmine like a streak of light Called to the wild side An intake of wilderness Throbbed in my mind’s eye again
[Verse] Night’s sky breathed aloud so slight Jasmine like a streak of light called to the wild side earnest An intake of wilderness throbbed in my mind’s eye again as it struggled within fen
[Verse] The owl hooted once its plight its cry silenced by the night that prepared for coming doom impending outcomes that loom Knell rang on as I knelt riled neither submissive nor wild
[Verse] The rose felt its thorns to grate through darkness that hid its gait Pictures In reminiscence shuddered with stark remembrance Dropping against my mindscape they plotted map for escape
[Chorus] Remnants of us glowed afresh ghostly ink against pink flesh A deathly pallor unsightly gaunt cheek though pale stood firmly Its twin it offered no more no retreating to before
[Verse] The lanterns hissed out their sprites as storms danced into their lights Darkness then prevailed curtained Cloak of night like a fog reigned a while as I let it creep within bosom bleak and deep
[Verse] Winds blew their hearts forever in clouds that scattered silver Bright coins strewn in sky as dots pennies would have outweighed thoughts as they roamed without purpose like eyes on giant argus
[Chorus] Remnants of us glowed afresh ghostly ink against pink flesh A deathly pallor unsightly gaunt cheek though pale stood firmly Its twin it offered no more no retreating to before
## 🎧 AI SONG
Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:
### 🎸 Blues version A blues interpretation emphasising raw emotion and expressive character. A deathly pallor – AI Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🎬 Cinematic version A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity. A deathly pallor – AI Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🙏 Gospel version A gospel-inspired version focusing on expressive phrasing and spiritual depth. A deathly pallor – AI Gospel Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS
This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno AI, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Blues, Cinematic and Gospel influences.
Veil so thin - AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Gospel and Indie Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice) 30 April 2026
Image credit: Freepik.com
## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS
I transformed this original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for an AI-generated song using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the AI-generated musical version.
## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM
This poem considers a world where love and truth are mistaken for weakness, and the alter ego that forms when one cannot reconcile such a world with their own principles.
She was freed Twice in a neat row The bluebirds They sang so Their beaks memories of honey The bees had gathered
[Verse] She was freed twice in a neat row The bluebirds, they always sang so their beaks memories of honey the bees had gathered in plenty I flew high keeping company with her wings’ leading symphony We move in skies with pale phantoms The moon witness to lost anthems
[Verse] We all die before we can live but desolation I forgive My years stretch into skies’ rainbows yet my heart loves Earth’s green meadows As with just sleeping, beauty fades We may exchange the hearts for spades breathe within shadows, count the cost yet the true love is never lost
[Chorus] Fleeting Time, I gather in hands rubbing oil through snakes’ kin’s demands filtered true which people think false the best hiding place for all faults Falsehoods hide under Veil so thin they are targets floating within We discover but what we choose the rest we give up and let loose
[Verse] The night’s kiss, a tale of lovers A story of darkened clovers now clubbed to death by the wit game In love we sometimes place the shame Nothing moves as I face winds still just sit around my window sill The wind is dead cold, the breath warm I gaze and feel the tired bees swarm
[Verse] Flies hover, suspended wings gleam Tomorrows sullen noise may seem Picking up the new mornings din I imbibe it, soak it in skin It vibrates, snakes crawl up my spine the sun troubling the dream divine We were free once upon a rhyme when teeth clicked tight shut against dime
[Chorus] Fleeting Time, I gather in hands rubbing oil through snakes’ kin’s demands filtered true which people think false the best hiding place for all faults Falsehoods hide under Veil so thin they are targets floating within We discover but what we choose the rest we give up and let loose
## 🎧 AI SONG
Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:
### 🎸 Blues version A blues interpretation emphasising raw emotion and expressive character. Veil so thin – AI Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🎬 Cinematic version A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity. Veil so thin – AI Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🙏 Gospel version A gospel-inspired version focusing on expressive phrasing and spiritual depth. Veil so thin– AI Gospel Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🌿 Indie version An indie interpretation with a softer, reflective tone, incorporating Asian instruments for a distinctive sound. Veil so thin – AI Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS
This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno AI, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Blues, Cinematic, Gospel and Indie influences.
Immortal (AI Suno song using my voice and my lyrics) 28 March 2026
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[Verse] The breath comes in rasps confined crashing senses realigned in surge of waves collapsing My inner realms synapsing with your nearest contact points as scribble wills aching joints
[Verse] Blowing firm Into the dust holding on to Earthen crust the world crumbles from vile wile as love lingers for a while We live plane traversing hearts Lo! routine with it departs
[Chorus] Immortal high in the skies carving me blue butterflies Flying free I am now whole wings remnants of unchained soul Ease to fly is what remains once the wings were freed from chains
[Verse] Whirling into shades of loss within red palms I bear cross Nighttime balms applied so thick now covered all neat and slick concealed circles of the pain though on meadows it will rain
[Verse] Eyes will not bear dreadful sight chests will heave from awful plight as the hearts will breathe in sighs ravens dark will pluck sad eyes carved within sunken shadows as I caw so wild with crows
[Chorus] Immortal high in the skies carving me blue butterflies Flying free I am now whole wings remnants of unchained soul Ease to fly is what remains once the wings were freed from chains
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Blues
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Folk
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Gospel
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Indie
Children of morrows;
their cries ringing everywhere
soaking Earth purple
Foggy landscapes met
teary eye saturated
with pains of fledglings
Stormy weather formed
flower of life in my chest
that drenched my heart red
Pouring rain renewed
hope in another Earth’s rise
The bud of my thoughts
Petals bloomed in mind
blossoms of tomorrow’s world
that dewy drops spelt
Misty skies breathed soft
whispers of promises kept
Wet grass tickled feet
It had been a while that she had started building the Merkaba. This was not an easy task as the weaving of the energies had to be done on a regular basis and based on a specific pattern. She wondered how it was that the Elders had succeeded in passing on this information to her during her sleep but every morning when she woke up she had a precise plan in her head for which points remained to be woven. On and on her nimble fingers wove into the air the patterns using the energy from the skies and from the trees outside her window.
Sometimes, it was also in the evenings that she resumed the weaving although it was best done at dawn and concluded with the rising sun. Day after day, she tirelessly wove the energies that emanated from her kinetic dance using both her hands in specific mudras as well as her intent focused on specific areas in space. The merkaba was to be a sphere-like construct that would be big enough to hold her whole body within it. It started from a point around the top of her head, near her crown chakra and expanded several metres above and away on each side of her body before finishing at her feet. Here too, the Merkaba had a distance of several metres before the small conic shape of its extremity ended with a cord-like construct within the soles of her feet.
Once the Merkaba was almost fully woven, she sealed the outer parts, leaving only a few slits in the front side to allow for entering or exiting the energetic vehicle without friction. The first time she had tried the vehicle on a test ride, it was an exhilirating experience, much akin to that of going on a roller coaster ride, except that one did it with the astral body including particles of the body and not the full body. She remembered the thrill of that joy ride for several weeks after the experience was over and for days after the ride her body had still felt out of balance as she struggled to keep her astral body in check.
A couple of days after she had finished weaving the Merkaba, her light body had been fully activated. This was achieved by input of a large part of her higher self that entered through her eyes into her body and activated the dormant genes within her to allow for release of the particles that would accompany the astral body within the Merkaba. The gene activation was necessary so as to allow for the mutation of the DNA that would allow her body to release some of her particles and then reintegrate them without destroying them later on
The Elders informed her that this process was necessary for her to be able to travel so far within the Merkaba and make it back to her body without mishaps as the particles would act as a genetic map reintegrating the shell that was destined to hold them, a process akin to genetic imprinting. They assured her that she would be safe and should be grateful for the chance bestowed upon her to accomplish this trip. She realised that it was indeed a beautiful gift from the Source to be granted the possibility of ascending while still alive.
Once the trip over, she maintained very few actual memories, however, of the Ascension trip and what she had found out behind the veil was now part of a hazy string of memories that resurfaced from time to time. She remembered the appeal of the remainder of her body when she had left it to travel within the Merkaba as it had remained on Earth scared, disoriented and incapable of taking care of itself properly. She remembered the beautiful blue beings that had surrounded her with tokens of love, compassion and empathy for humankind.
She wished she could repeat the experience again but the blueprint of the Merkaba was no longer given to her by the Ancient ones. It was as if this was a preliminary test that they had allowed and despite her various appeals to them they remained aloof and did not transfer this information to her unconscious mind anymore. She wondered whether she would have to seek the help of a hypnotist in order to retrieve the blueprint or at least some memories of that beautiful Ascension trip she had made but somehow something always stopped her from pursuing this for now.
Every full moon night, she would look up at the skies and sigh as the looming moon reminded her of what it was like to be in the skies among the planets. One day, she swore to herself, she would travel again within a new Merkaba she would build. She would perform her kinetic dances again appealing to the cosmic dancer to grant her once more the knowledge of the right steps so that she could build up the appropriate energy waves required for the weaving of the Merkaba. She knew that sometime in the near future the Elders would come back to her and reveal the pattern to her again as she had been feeling their presence of late. She smiled up at the moon that seemed to smile back at her.
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