Immortal renew – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice) 12 September 2026
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS
I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.
## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM
Immortal Renew explores transformation through choice — the willingness to be diluted, digested, divested and remade without losing the essential self within. At its heart lies the “choice liver”: both the body that transforms what it receives and the person who chooses how to live. Immortal Renew finds immortality not in remaining unchanged, but in our capacity to transform, release and begin again.
Dilute me Particles of Sound Withering Blistering On the souls of the damsels That travel the streets
[Verse] Dilute me Particles of Sound Withering, blistering around The souls of the damsels retreats while they travel within the streets
[Verse] Digress me into Oblivion Lay me low, Birth hollow union In the grounds of New Earth that sings beyond Voices and Angels wings
[Chorus] Digest me, I am choice liver I rain blue, message deliver Within me to new life a clue Rainbow hue, Immortal renew
[Verse] Divest me, parting with value Instil me harmless weight subdued Shiver sliding throughout my gait rewrites the Chronicles of fate
[Verse] Dismiss me Particles to miss Bring and tell for a mindful bliss Heaving Heart that knows all will swell under moonshine rain to foretell
[Verse] Direct me Play of thirteen acts Sign me Pacts within Breath contracts I swallow hard the venom made In between the tongue and the shade
[Chorus] Digest me, I am choice liver I rain blue, message deliver Within me to new life a clue Rainbow hue, Immortal renew
## 🎧 SUNO SONG
Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:
### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes Immortal renew – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Ethereal Indie version Ethereal Indie interpretation with a reflective tone, gentle piano, acoustic guitar and flute for a distinctive sound Immortal renew – Ethereal Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Noir Trip-Hop version A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth Immortal renew – Noir Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS
This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie and Trip-Hop influences.
Immortal (AI Suno song using my voice and my lyrics) 28 March 2026
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[Verse] The breath comes in rasps confined crashing senses realigned in surge of waves collapsing My inner realms synapsing with your nearest contact points as scribble wills aching joints
[Verse] Blowing firm Into the dust holding on to Earthen crust the world crumbles from vile wile as love lingers for a while We live plane traversing hearts Lo! routine with it departs
[Chorus] Immortal high in the skies carving me blue butterflies Flying free I am now whole wings remnants of unchained soul Ease to fly is what remains once the wings were freed from chains
[Verse] Whirling into shades of loss within red palms I bear cross Nighttime balms applied so thick now covered all neat and slick concealed circles of the pain though on meadows it will rain
[Verse] Eyes will not bear dreadful sight chests will heave from awful plight as the hearts will breathe in sighs ravens dark will pluck sad eyes carved within sunken shadows as I caw so wild with crows
[Chorus] Immortal high in the skies carving me blue butterflies Flying free I am now whole wings remnants of unchained soul Ease to fly is what remains once the wings were freed from chains
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Blues
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Folk
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Gospel
“Immortal” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Indie
She felt him return. It was imperceptible at first but then growingly clear that he had come back. Her mind went back to the preliminary stages of the initiation. The being that had taken her on the path to the land of all beginnings was back again. She wondered whether he was there to castigate her for she had not listened closely to all his teachings when she had ventured on the path. He had told her that it was primordial to lose all fear before she started but she had not fully realised what he had meant then. The split that had occurred between her etheric and bodily selves had been extremely painful and instead of being an experience full of light, it had been overshadowed with fears and had lead to an uneven ascension.
She turned towards where she knew he stood looking at her and voiced her regret. He answered her back in her mind that there was no point in regretting now. She had gone through the needle’s eye but had not fully gone through the purge of the flames and until she did that devoid of fears, she would not be born into the light properly. Her higher birth had been hindered by the fear and she was therefore only partially born again into the etheric. Although she would maintain the contact with the land of all beginnings, she needed a token and would not be able to freely interact with it until she had completed her rebirth.
A phoenix is reborn through the flames and not just by undergoing the impression of flames, he said
I do not know if I am ready, she answered
When your mind is devoid of fear, you can take the path again. Your deeds will no longer be weighed but you will undergo other tests for your rebirth, the first of which is the preliminary birth through the flames
Aren’t the flames enough ?
The flames are just the beginning, the shedding of your mortal self and birth into the eternal realms
Will my bodily frame disappear completely ?
But my dear, you have no body. It is all a concept of your mind and the more you attach yourself to that perception, the more mortal you become
Are you saying that we could become immortal ?
You are already immortal but you do not realise it. That lack of realisation of your immortal selves is what makes you age, die and come here again as another bodily self but it is always you. Until you realise that you are immortal, you will keep coming here
So what happens when we realise that we are immortal
Well, you either stop coming here because it no longer interests you or if you have built relationships with beings here that you care for then you come back as guides that hardly age and do not die but transcend when the density of this world becomes too much for them to bear
What should I do then
Start from the beginning again. Focus on clearing yourself from the fears and then we will start the path again. You should have started meditating properly like I advised you to before initiating the path
I am meditating now. Will that change things ?
Yes, you will be able to see beyond your fears, the true nature of things
She realised he was showing her parts of him and she wondered whether it was her imagination or whether he really looked like that. She took in the majestic demeanour, the perfectly shaped torso and the strange birdlike face. It all looked very familiar and then suddenly the realisation hit her. She ran to her laptop and googled what was on her mind and there he stood, much like the being in front of her, except that the picture was an exaggerated version of his physical traits. It was him, the one that had been on her mind all the while before this being had made its entrance into her life : Horus !
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