A form of chaos
18 January 2016
The fresh spring breeze
Spreading upon snow clad paths
Ice and weeds patterns
The heart in love’s mode
Flowed into green beginnings
Where sprouts spoke of life
Crisp wind sang aloud
Of flowers’ variety
That splattered springs’ way
Colourful design
Nature a different painting
Divine the painter
The original
Duplicated in spirit
Replicas’ hot trend
Tone of flesh and bone
The technique impeccable
Natural and raw
Parrot composer
Recent method of live art
Dreamtime’s wane copy
Cloning every soul
Mimicking style and habit
Late winters’ witness
You and I unique
Freedom our approach in life
A form of chaos
Written in the context of RonovanWrites Weekly Haiku Poetry Prompt Challenge using the words Style & Fresh or their synonyms. Ping back and rules here
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Good one with perfect finish!!!
Thank you Sakthi 🙂
Beautiful imagery! xx
Thank you
Ohhh….this is so good. Geetha you are magnificent at this style. I’m always in awe of the feelings you convey. Beautifully done, Poetess. ♡
Thank you so much Eric and the feeling of admiration is mutual Poet. Be well ❤️
Your words always echo within me as I read and savor them. The beauty of your verse knows no bound and so wonderful is your talent to write in any form. I absolutely loved the title. Genius you are my friend!
Thank you so much Dajena. I love your comments really my friend 🙂
And I am happy to have met you dear friend for your poetry is amazing, and YOU are amazing!
Thank you dearest and I feel the same about you and your poetry 🙂
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Beautiful poem, pictures and music!
Thanks Blair 🙂
Geetha, I admire your ability to consistently write these amazing Haiku Sets. “A form of chaos” is wonderful. So many fabulous lines, a favorite, “Spreading upon snow clad paths”, and the following stanza really spoke to me,
“Tone of flesh and bone
The technique impeccable
Natural and raw”
Thank you for sharing your poetic voice, always delightful! ~ Mia
Thank you Mia it somehow keeps flowing for now and I am grateful for that. Wonderful to know your name I did not gather it from your blog. I often marvel at nature and its beauty thinking of it as painted by a Divine painter and then I think of how incredibly well that same hand has painted us all, hence the poem with a reference to cloning. Keep reading and writing. We all enrich each other 🙂
Geetha, thank you for a lovely reply. Have a wonderful day.
Thanks and you too 🙂
A clever use of ordered and cyclical seasons juxtaposed with the chaos of freedom, in creating an image of two unique people meeting – a perfect relationship formed out of what is otherwise perceived as chaos. Beautiful, Geetha 🙂
Thank you Thomas 🙂
You are welcome, Geetha 🙂
There’s method in the chaos…wonderful lines as well as the pictures to complement them… 🙂
Thanks Maniparna, yes there is always method in the chaos 😀
A lovely sentiment and beautiful words.
Thank you Marissa
Beautiful words and pictures alike.
Thank you Christian. I tried to find pictures relating to observers of the characters relating to the actions in the poem rather than viewing the actions through the eyes of the characters
The beauty of chaos.
a form of chaos coz God’s willness.we r thankful for different type of nature n dt love who is belongd from spring n before its snowfall.
Thank you Aruna, yes, we should be thankful for the differences while celebrating our similarities too
Most beautiful chaos <3
Thank you !