Evergreen
1 June 2016
Stretching out
Reality flows
Like a dream
Illusion
Patterns born in confusion
Of the troubled mind
Your traces
Unrelenting ghosts
Relaying
In outposts
Your body twirling in hosts
Light receptacle
Caving in
Reality shows
Polished sheen
Evergreen
Sprouting from the roots unseen
The love stored within
Reading of the poem:
Unintended – Muse
wow!
Thank you Rafsan
you are welcome!
Such perfect combination of sound and words! Bets lunch companion I can have :0
That is a great compliment. Thank you Hector! 🙂
Geetha!
Sprouting from the roots unseen
The love stored within
Shall become Evergreen.
Yes!
I have published the Haiku I told you yesterday.
See if it matches to your thoughts.
Shiva
Great! Will have a look
Well, it is eternal.
🙂
Your words go so wonderfullly with the images you used. Loved the lines – “Patterns born in confusion. Of the troubled mind.” Great write.
Thank you Andrew 🙂
Excellent imagery – yours!
😀 I like your specifying emphasis. Thanks Derrick 🙂