Particles to keep
21-22 February 2016
The fog clung to him
Like a parasite on beast
That shuddered anew
Confusion reigned in bosom
Replicating dormant fears
The moon high in sky
Glistened on frozen landscapes
Colour of silver
Within my heart the stillness
Shone with steely glint’s tremors
The clouds soft whispered
To pregnant skies that would weep
Particles to keep
Like uncertain skies I shed
Secrets of life that we dread
Reading of the poem:
Too much Heaven – Bee Gees
The fog clung to him, Like a parasite on beast. From those opening words you captured me. Oh. what an amazing write.
Thank you Andrew. Glad to see you around. I hope your writing is going on well 🙂
Doing my thing. Trying to keep up with posts as best I can. This was good.
Thanks xoxo
This is amazing! The words are so alluring!
Thank you Samia 🙂
This beautiful and the artwork goes so well with it.
Thank you Adele 🙂
The images are mind blowing and they complement your words so beautifully. You never cease to awe!
Thank you Swetha. I hope you are well 🙂
Yes very well indeed so far 😀
Lovely images with a hopeful outcome
Thanks Derrick 🙂
The weight of the world lines from the opening image of a shackled angel to the whispers to pregnant skies (one of my favorite images) there is a build up of tension that will hopefully be released Eventually we have to face those fears whose roots are buried deep within the particles of our being. I believe it’s when we have faced our deepest fears that we can finally see that light. Gorgeous poetry, Geetha!
Very true Thomas. A beautiful day to you my friend <3
Thank you, Geetha. Be well!
Thank you Thomas. You too 🙂
You are welcome, Geetha! Thanks 🙂
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The poem and the way you told it are both impeccable. 🙂
Thank you Rosema <3
My pleasure, Geetha!:)
This has to be the most awesome description of a character ever “The fog clung to him
Like a parasite on beast
That shuddered anew
Confusion reigned in bosom
Replicating dormant fears” It says so much about him and its so vivid and visceral at the same time. you can feel his confusion and the annoyance of the fog.
Thank you Melinda. Am running behind schedule on reading but hope to catch up on yours this weekend. Much love to you <3
You’re welcome 🙂 my words will be there waiting. I think I missed a couple of your posts too. I must rectify that!
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And it’s wonderful to hear your voice too!
xoxo <3
Beautiful, Geetha. And those images are so perfect. 🙂
Thank you Poet 🙂
What an ominous poem. Shout out for The BeeGees!
Thank you Marissa. I love them too. Well times are tough 😀
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