Domino effect
1 April 2016
Puzzle me
Let me rotate you
Into frames
Whirling flames
The mind often will play games
Lonely hide and seek
Seeker meek
Daffodils fly high
Yellow bred
Sun’s colours
They seed the roots of worship
In heart of summer
Your mind whirls
A pool of blue fears
Swim with sharks
I with larks
Sing the rise of morning dues
Prayers of lifetime
Silent rhyme
Synchronicities
They pile ash
In graveyards
Bones a structure of sketches
That mind remembers
Red embers
They surge with the need
Within chest
Built unrest
Sandalwood buried in vest
As I disrobe you
Leaves of past
They gather rubble
Soothe toothache
Summon snake
That coils up my spine in love
Domino effect
Reading of the poem:
Bei Mir Bist Du Schön – Waldeck
A whirl of fun
Thank you Derrick 🙂
Wow. such a wonderful mind whirl indeed!
Thank you my friend. I am glad you liked it 🙂
This was great. That last stanza perfect. Also loved the stanza where the mind whiirls
Thank you Andrew 🙂
Wonderful, Geetha! I love the last stanza. I often have a brief image of dried leaves blowing in the wind when I think of past endeavors.
beautiful.
Thank you Eric. I guess leaves and specially dried leaves can be so symptomatic of the rustling pages of the past 🙂
And a good domino effect at that!
Thank you Marissa 🙂
Get out of my head/ ha! There’s so much truth in your eloquent words.
Ah ah ah Tosha, you say most of what I want to say anyway in your poems 😀
😉 birds of a feather
We flock to where we belong 😀
We do!