I have a nightmare
14 March 2016
I still feel
Touch of summer breeze
It held me
In rapture
As my heart you then captured
Under spells of fate
You and I
Made from the same thread
You spun lies
I spun truth
In between there were tangles
Where we smoothed angles
Brief instant
Concentric circles
Lapped at squares
No split hairs
Overcoming all hurdles
Geometries matched
You in me
Within dreamtime’s realm
Ecstatic
Lost magic
You the captain at my helm
Guided me to port
Safe Haven
Memories of green
I spoke Love
You mistake
We never own what we take
Over the free will
I still freeze
I have a nightmare
Where the breeze
Talks to us
Persuades me to let go
I never say no
Reading of the poem:
Ruhe – Schiller
Catching up on your posts. Terrific as usual.
JP
Thank you Jean-Paul. I have yet to catch up on yours 🙂
Song, verbal poetry and words. Perfect and beautiful.
Thank you for your kind words 🙂
You are welcome my friend.
A terrible nightmare indeed. My sympathies for having it, Geetha. But a least we can write about it to help with some of the trauma.
Thank you Eric. Yes, very true, writing helps
A brilliant write. I love this piece. But my favorite line was – We never own what we take. That was awesome.
Thank you Andrew. I am a staunch believer in free will, to the extent that even if I know sometimes that things would be best done a certain way, I leave it to the other person to decide if it does not affect me significantly
Understood. I love your way.
Thank you. I am not sure I love it 😀
Nightmare’s Frozen here. A real good blog you’ve here. I love your works on Poem. Looking forward to read more Geetha. 🙂 It would be great to have your visit to my recent blog post. http://wp.me/s6DOCV-staghunt
Hi Karmughil. I don’t know why your comment went to spam. I just read it. Thanks a lot and I hope to visit your blog soon.
I don’t know either. Sure thanks. 🙂
Welcome 🙂
That is a nightmare, indeed
Yes, a very vivid nightmare I might add
I’m sure