Hushed star’s path
26 February 2016
The wonder
Unfolding slowly
Higher sights
Within range
Vivid photons now derange
The smooth horizons
Succession
Past present future
Wondrous views
Earth renews
Icy age follows the fires
Metamorphosis
Moon hurtling
Out of its orbit
Sparkling death
Knitted net
A sun its son to remit
Within starlit skies
There is love
Woven in my heart
As I walk
Free and lone
Into the blue wilderness
Breathing the waters
I dive slow
Into melding sand
While the winds
Hold my hand
New heavens and Earths greet me
As I emerge low
Her scents whiff
Guiding star shines bright
Mother calls
Silent voice
They starch her choked collar stiff
As she exhales light
Talk to me
Between you and me
Hushed star’s path
Broken maze
The sights of you in a haze
As we gather core
Reading of the poem:
Lights & Motion – The Spectacular quiet
I so love your beautiful poems and the videos. The wonders of life are unfolding to those who are ready to receive.
Thank you. It is very true that thought
Spectral, uplifting
Thank you Derrick 🙂
Another beautiful poem Geetha love this one.
Thank you Adele 🙂
A vivid and moving poem. I could feel it swoosh by like the wind!
Thank you Dajena. That was pretty much the feeling I had while writing 🙂
You are welcome Geetha!
<3
I love the metaphor in this poem and how it twists and turns this stanza is just wonderful:
“Moon hurtling
Out of its orbit
Sparkling death
Knitted net
A sun its son to remit
Within starlit skies”
That line “A sun its son to remit” is so powerful. I love the video you pared with the poem!
Thank you Melinda 🙂 Am looking forward to reading yours. I like to read them unhurried as they are deep 🙂
You’re welcome 🙂 Thank you for your kind words about my humble posts. They mean much to me.
They mean much to me as well Melinda 🙂
it warms my heart to hear that 😀
” the moon hurting ” I sometimes feel this so intensely dear Geetha …your poetry continues to touch my heart …love , megxxx
Thank you Meg, as does yours. Much love. G
i found your poem very moving, best of all, hearing it read in the sound of your voice gave the poem another dimension..
kisses chris
Thanks Chris. Kisses to you too
Damn, you got use “too”…
Why, what’s the problem 🙂
Nothing, it i don’t get use that double O too often…
🙂
Playing with the time…like the way you do this… 🙂
Thank you Maniparna 🙂
You always tie in your powerful words, music, and images so well. Love the Succession stanza. The past present and future do provide amazing views, but it is through our own Metamorphosis that we can best enjoy that view.
Thank you Andrew. You are very right in that view. At the same time I feel and see that we uncover the other side that already exists more than we actually change ourselves into something that did not exist. It is like lifting a veil rather than an actual evolution.
Understood. Lifting the veil can be just as enlightening.
Lovely! You must be a very spiritual person!
Thank you Marissa. I meditate a lot and try to keep my connection with the all. I discovered healing capacities last year and have increased my introspection time as it allows me to heal people better.
Seems spiritual to me. It was odd because I was just watching something that involved some ladies getting a spiritual reading and then going on to your poetry, it just struck me.
Getting a spiritual reading sounds interesting 🙂
Yes, I’ve never done.
I hope it’s a good experience