Touched untouched
22 May 2016
Strange feeling
Floating in limbo
Connected
Caring strong
For the tribes where we belong
Intricate crisscross
Sense of loss
The bosom a rock
Twining strength
With frailty
To have and never to keep
Fluttering yet deep
Maidens weep
While the knights battle
Humans then
Or cattle
The answer is suspended
In between the breaths
Quest ended
Beginning in end
Unending
Curtain falls
Encore says the crowd cheering
For a new replay
Lost in hay
The needle of hope
The three Norns
Threading bare
Precision of unkempt hair
Fate chance encounter
Sensations
Fluctuating point
Limbs collate
At the joint
Emotions bubbles in air
Love fear joy despair
Multiple
The forces at work
Patchwork feel
Divine quirk
The chore handed down with smirk
Opposing contracts
Cast me net
The fish are lively
Their gills shine
Mirth divine
Repopulate holy shrine
Phosphorescent nests
Conflicting
Energies shift fast
Faith steadfast
Touched untouched
All is in blink of the eye
Peace profound balance
Reading of the poem:
A thousand times good night – Abel Korzeniowski
Song of Time – Abel Korzeniowski
Terra – Abel Korzeniowski
Absolutely love this. Your opening stanza set the mood that you carried through out.
Thank you Andrew.
“The Tribes Where we belong.” A great thought line. Also came upon another Geetha. Geetha Navale. Here is her music.
https://youtu.be/Y8OhvsNXSIA
I’m with Marissa. The music reinforces this
Thank you Derrick. It was a not so peaceful night yesterday so the dreamtime poetry was a bit perturbed. I actually had to wait until the end of the day to write what had come to me as I was working all day. Sometimes I simply forget entire poems because the day is too hectic and unfortunately what came one instant flowing easily then all of a sudden disappears.
I am really inquisitive about the fact that from where you get the pics. Love these pics.
And nothing much to say about ur writing. 🙂
The pics are from google. I use keywords that come to me in dreamtime. So for touched untouched for example I used Three Norns, weaving, touch and Fate. I guess the ones you love the most are those from Karol Bak’s art. They’re really beautiful
Wow. 🙂
Love the juxtaposing of the peaceful and frenetic.
Thanks Marissa :). Isn’t that howlife appears alternatively? Amusing or distressing depending on how you look at it
Yes, certainly.