Deleting the Sun
11 January 2017
Black rain fell
Like coloured concept
Our hearts ink
Sinking pink
Moving to Chinese landscapes
Mock land of the One
Children tell
Of stories now swept
Memories
Moving trees
Sometimes the Mind the Heart shapes
Removing the fun
When hearts sell
The brides maids that wept
Fallen leaves
The mind grieves
The soul heart and mind escapes
Deleting the Sun
Reading of the poem:
Clouds – Abel Korzeniowski
Really touching the heart.Very much
Thank you Shanti
A sad one
Thank you Derrick. Yes, quite a sad thing really
I know the feeling. Can you do that with a computer keyboard?
You can try to Marissa. Control Alt Delete. I had a poem like that once
Ha, ha! Love it!
Control Halt Delete | Geetha Balvannanathan’s Blog
https://geethaprodhom.wordpress.com/poems-by-language/english-poems/control-halt-delete/
Ah, very cool!