In circles of bliss – Cinematic, Folk, Indie Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

In circles of bliss - Cinematic, Folk, Indie Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
1 June 2026
woman sitting in lotus meditation pose with crystal circles around her
Image credit: Magnific.com

## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Set between the vastness of infinity and the fragility of human existence, this poem explores the journey from separation to presence. Through images of oceans, lotus flowers, rain-soaked landscapes, and forgotten threads, it reflects on awakening to the deeper essence that flows beneath illusion. It is a reminder that while the body is fleeting, the consciousness that perceives beauty, meaning, and connection reaches far beyond its temporary form.

I speak Blue
My canvas defined
Oceans’ words
Stretched waters
Definition who is who
Diluted in hearts

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/03/25/in-circles-of-bliss/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
My canvas defined, I speak Blue
Definition of who is who
The oceans’ words stretched steep waters
diluted in hearts in quarters

[Verse]
The pain starts within the focus
To define where, set the locus
Derive bright light from nearby air
open the Lotus refine flair

[Chorus]
The target hit yet gone amiss
Gone the pain in circles of bliss
They shine bright, all flows through essence
through my Heart they restore presence

[Verse]
We are carved Infinity’s trails
yet pace deserts like inching snails
Scorching sands now our daily bread
Forever lost the divine thread

[Verse]
I seized it, entrance into all
I was none though stood upright, tall
I witnessed how it had begun
Illusion, mind game that was spun

[Verse]
Meanings of rain peremptory
my body death accessory
It paints the wild and withered lands
that the throb within understands

[Chorus]
The target hit yet gone amiss
Gone the pain in circles of bliss
They shine bright, all flows through essence
through my Heart they restore presence

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic version
A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity.
In circles of bliss – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Folk version
A folk interpretation of the song, focusing on acoustic textures and a more intimate, stripped-down sound that highlights the lyrical and emotional core.
In circles of bliss – Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Indie version
An indie interpretation with a softer, reflective tone, incorporating plaintive cello and violin sounds for a distinctive indie sound.
In circles of bliss – Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Noir Blues, Dark Folk and Noir Trip-Hop influences.

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Internal flicker fed my hope

Internal flicker fed my hope
20 December 2024
Courtesy freepik.com


The blackbirds flying oh so high
over war torn landscapes they sigh
wings forming black waves in the sky
They replicate patterns on Earth

The world hurled out its wayward grief
It seemed there just was no relief
I looked at it in disbelief
Would I withstand what was in store?

I lay low in the leafy grass
body weighted like solid brass
eyes peering through the looking glass
would tomorrow hold new meanings?

My heart survived the black dismay
I kept the gloomy thoughts at bay
I piled upon me yellow hay
to make believe in new sunrise

Sun’s pallor shone at languid pace
to serve a day of deep disgrace
when men their horrors would not face
so the innocent paid the price

A thousand children were our shame
most surely we are all to blame
we saw them fall to deadly flame
now rubble and tears fill our hearts

I lift a world of red ember
a weight more than I remember
In a cold night of December
internal flicker fed my hope

Written in the context of Ronovan writes Ovi Poetry challenge using the word "remember" as inspiration. For the rules and more poems, please follow this link https://ronovanwrites.com/2024/12/18/ovi-poetry-challenge-79-remember-is-your-inspiration/

Reading of the poem:
Emel Mathlouthi - Ma Lkit Official Video

All grows within me

All grows within me
26 September 2023
Courtesy pinterest.com
The world twirls
whirling into place
Rejection,
acceptance,
contradictory notions
into level field

Winding paths
lead into somewhere
Guesstimate,
impressions
All that I have unravels
as my eye follows

Within mind
landscapes of morrows
they shine bright
through my will
I am now unbreakable
All grows within me

Reading of the poem: 
Sia - Courage To Change

Consciousness

Consciousness
5 March 2021
Courtesy pinterest.com
Mind rising 
encounters blockage:
underground
resistance
I fly through with insistence 
a trip beyond seen

Meadows move
beyond my eyesight
born outside
they revel
in continued uprising
shunning my landscapes

Like snake dance
revealing the veil
consciousness
is centered
My fingertips penetrate
edge of its tremor

Reading of the poem: 
Dinka - Wuthering Heights (Tribute To Enigma Mix)

Dinka – Wuthering Heights (Tribute To Enigma Mix) – YouTube

Stormy weather stains

Stormy weather stains

23 February 2018

realms stormgrounds com
Courtesy stormgrounds.com

 

Lightning strikes on plains

The dark one losing his gains

Expunged all our pains

 

Desert landscapes sigh

Behold the thundering sky

Truth is born from lie

 

Haughty mares shake manes

Dragons’ blood courses through veins

Sun and moon in lanes

 

Spirits soaring high

Eagles and falcons now fly

Nature to comply

 

The gleaming moon wanes

Willing the skies as it rains

Stormy weather stains

 

Reading of the poem: 

Ly O Lay Ale Loya (Circle Dance) ~ Native Song

Drums of Thunder (Native American Music) Mountain Spirits

Calming Native American Flute over Thunderstorm

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=U5r95066RjM

Stars written

Stars written

5 May 2017

Starswritten pt forwallpaper com
Courtesy pt.forwallpaper.com

 

Disorder

Laid back in order

On border

Recorder

Landscapes that scribe sees broader

The soul much grander

 

Obsessive

All doubt to outlive

Compulsive

Will to live

Overwhelming gift to give

To love and forgive

 

System spate

The chains that we grate

We broke late

You translate

It was She who bosom ate

Clearing up the plate

 

Cloudy dome

Straying within home

Metal chrome

Sound of Ohm

Not all paths will lead to Rome

The mind oft will roam

 

See the light

Rocking cradle right

End of spite

Brittle might

Shadows dark don’t creep the night

Upending the fight

 

Hymn for soul

Music to console

Expunged coal

Closed the hole

Recovering from wormhole

The dot from the whole

 

Meek kitten

The coffin laid in

Hate driven

Stars written

Waking the blue green maiden

The soul ne’er laden

 

Reading of the poem: 

starswritten lincolnjarrison com
Courtesy lincolnjarrison.com

Music for Your Soul ( Carino)- Chris Spheeris

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=q_u3WIrXIn8

Walking through the throngs

Walking through the throngs

23 April 2017

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Courtesy hdwallpaperpc.com

 

Twenty-three fools sit

In cornerstone of fires

Alit with your smile

 

Igniting landscapes

The blackbirds that the mind shapes

Irresolute skies

 

Feathers translucent

Picking up black emotion

Transforming its scent

 

Meeting of the Tides

A play of twelve nets forecast

Mesh Dragon Star rides

 

Walk with a fiddle

Tune into everlasting

Path to Home riddle

 

Mind never belongs

Heart a gateway in between

Walking through the throngs

 

Reading of the poem: 

walking cosmopolitain co uk
Courtesy cosmopolitain.co.uk

The Way Home – Sleep Dealer

Nebula – Sleep Dealer

Endless Route – Sleep Dealer

 

Rewriting intent

Rewriting intent

1 April 2017

 

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Courtesy Camille Corot on studyblue.com

 

Create trends

From the bosom’s light that lends

Truest blends

Stitching mends

The desolation that ends

Through fierce heart that fends

 

Blue landscapes

The hand that all scrapes

Eye that shapes

Mouth that gapes

The cry that from heart escapes

Building new mind drapes

 

Loopholes bent

Messages now sent

The portent

Underwent

Changes in structure of tent

Rewriting intent

 

Reading of the poem:

rewriting Johannes rosierse
Courtesy Johannes Rosierse

Sandman Lullabye – Enya

Water shows the hidden heart – Enya

Pain the Sky with Stars – Enya

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=enefF0XfkgM

Deleting the Sun

Deleting the Sun

11 January 2017

 

christian-schloe-she-spoke-roses-austrian-surrealist-digital-painter-tuttart-6

 

Black rain fell

Like coloured concept

Our hearts ink

Sinking pink

Moving to Chinese landscapes

Mock land of the One

 

Children tell

Of stories now swept

Memories

Moving trees

Sometimes the Mind the Heart shapes

Removing the fun

 

When hearts sell

The brides maids that wept

Fallen leaves

The mind grieves

The soul heart and mind escapes

Deleting the Sun

 

Reading of the poem: 

christian-scloe-suns-nest
Courtesy Christian Schloe

Clouds – Abel Korzeniowski

 

The Watcher

The Watcher

1 October 2016

watcher filmint nu.jpg
Courtesy filmint.nu

 

Singled out

Phrases from the book

Of shadows

Seeping through

Sand of the desert landscapes

Plaintive muted tapes

 

Sorrows pour

Drink of the numbness

The duress

Concentrate

Dilution mindset of Hope

Renewed way to cope

 

We bear hurt

Anguish a blemish

The Watcher

Dissolves slow

Restoration lifetime’s Art

Renewing the glow

 

Reading of the poem: 

watcher-deviantart-com
Courtesy deviantart.com

Summoning of the Muse – Dead Can Dance