In circles of bliss - Cinematic, Folk, Indie Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice) 1 June 2026
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS
I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.
## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM
Set between the vastness of infinity and the fragility of human existence, this poem explores the journey from separation to presence. Through images of oceans, lotus flowers, rain-soaked landscapes, and forgotten threads, it reflects on awakening to the deeper essence that flows beneath illusion. It is a reminder that while the body is fleeting, the consciousness that perceives beauty, meaning, and connection reaches far beyond its temporary form.
I speak Blue My canvas defined Oceans’ words Stretched waters Definition who is who Diluted in hearts
[Verse] My canvas defined, I speak Blue Definition of who is who The oceans’ words stretched steep waters diluted in hearts in quarters
[Verse] The pain starts within the focus To define where, set the locus Derive bright light from nearby air open the Lotus refine flair
[Chorus] The target hit yet gone amiss Gone the pain in circles of bliss They shine bright, all flows through essence through my Heart they restore presence
[Verse] We are carved Infinity’s trails yet pace deserts like inching snails Scorching sands now our daily bread Forever lost the divine thread
[Verse] I seized it, entrance into all I was none though stood upright, tall I witnessed how it had begun Illusion, mind game that was spun
[Verse] Meanings of rain peremptory my body death accessory It paints the wild and withered lands that the throb within understands
[Chorus] The target hit yet gone amiss Gone the pain in circles of bliss They shine bright, all flows through essence through my Heart they restore presence
## 🎧 SUNO SONG
Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:
### 🎬 Cinematic version A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity. In circles of bliss – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Folk version A folk interpretation of the song, focusing on acoustic textures and a more intimate, stripped-down sound that highlights the lyrical and emotional core. In circles of bliss – Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Indie version An indie interpretation with a softer, reflective tone, incorporating plaintive cello and violin sounds for a distinctive indie sound. In circles of bliss – Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS
This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Noir Blues, Dark Folk and Noir Trip-Hop influences.
A difficult choice this time. I go for Indie
Thank you Derrick.