The journey – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

The journey – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
23 September 2026
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

A journey through reckoning and release, where the self must loosen its knots before it can become light enough to fly. Between scales and rosaries, burned houses and cloud-white shrouds, in The journey, old identities surrender their solidity and the distance between the earthly self and the I AM begins to unfold. At the rim of the sky, Sun and Moon meet face to face — masculine and feminine witnessing a solitary passage through disgrace, transformation and transcendence.

Wrapping up
Tying the loose ends
In firm knots
They align
Their drooping figures a sign
Of the oncoming

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/06/16/the-journey/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Wrapping up, tying the loose ends
of the oncoming slow amends
Their drooping figures a clear sign
In little firm knots they align

[Verse]
Move further, the day’s labour calls
Disappearing mass heart recalls
The Scales for the future they weigh
Diligently the Hands obey

[Chorus]
The journey carries me through clouds
Lily White and pure like his shrouds
He is the King of my castle
His light my Kingdom to dazzle

[Verse]
The sun sets on valleys that sway
in tall homes where the Preachers pray
Their rosaries held a staircase
between me and I to displace

[Verse]
Through nimble fingers still counting
The total bill then amounting
to gate keeper’s fee for house burned
The night breathes the scent of days churned

[Verse]
I fly lone through sunrise within
until I reach of skies the rim
The Moon and the sun Face to face
see me through the deepest disgrace

[Chorus]
The journey carries me through clouds
Lily White and pure like his shrouds
He is the King of my castle
His light my Kingdom to dazzle

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version
Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes
The journey – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Ethereal Indie version
Ethereal Indie interpretation with a reflective tone, gentle piano, acoustic guitar and flute for a distinctive sound
The journey – Ethereal Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Mystical Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
The journey – Mystical Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie and Trip-Hop influences.

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Through shores of the Heart

Through shores of the Heart

30 April 2017

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Winking eye

Gather new plays sigh

We hurry

To bury

Corridors winding staircase

Intersect in case

 

Cutting edge

The cluster a wedge

Twixt two hearts

Banter smarts

Willingness a light token

A mend for broken

 

I am beam

Together we gleam

Moments Light

Birdlike sight

Distilling an unknown Art

Through shores of the Heart

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Love – Volkan Uca

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Nj0SksTXrGc

I died yesterday

I died yesterday

9 November 2015

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She sacred victim

Not to death but more to life

I died yesterday

 

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The Heart the mind churned

Eating from the humblest Pie

Learn to Square Circle

.

Twenty three my roots

As the atoms with the breath

Cross rays to dissolve

.

Dynamics of Love

Unstable equilibrium

Above Delta spin

.

Sacred was the dance

Within skin circumference

Lead the light-filled rays

.

Essence now free me

Staircase counts end of Heartpath

Metatron’s dark side

.

Infinity’s fumes

Took stillness to Twenty-two

Through moonlight’s chamber

.

Dark I was widow

I flowed as tomorrow’s bride

I died yesterday

.

Heart grieved seven years

The underdogs’ power surged

Resistance in Ohm

.

I chanted behind

Four more arrows’ golden sphere

Little bones’ white noise

.

Pink sphere’s future veil

Backward source in sonic wall

Pink circles my trails

.

Suicide sheep now shift

Trancescape’s aqua forest fog

Cast away reeds’ sparks

.

Of dancing feathers

Waves crack opening heartpath

North stillness in storm

.

Maya dying swan

How graceful your fluttering

Sinusoidal

.

Electricity

Shift in downward frequencies

I died yesterday

.

Sixty one in grace

Three stages of innocence

As sixteen turns wise

.

Opening the shaft

Electricity simmers

Yellow in the red

.

The kraken approached

Land of nevermore dissolved

In Eye of Monster

.

I like Mother quaked

Our bones in poles now shifted

To bluest graveyards

.

As the chants now hummed

I lived in the bloodied flood

Red was my garment

.

They sprinkled waters

Led bees to our choicest source

Red rose gives honey

.

Perhaps another

She offered me a new chance

I died yesterday

.

Now with all consumed

In Heart only renewal

I live on Today

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Dorothy Meets The Tinman (The Wizard of Oz 1939)

Gurdjieff Sacred Dance – Ho Yah

Rumi Poem, Iranian Music and Divine Dance

Darkside – Metatron (Music Video)

Darkside – Heart

Darkside (Psychic) – Golden Arrow

Etherwood – Cast Away

Maya Plisetskaya, age 61, dances Dying Swan

Hans Zimmer – Duduk Of The North

Hans Zimmer – The Kraken

Hans Zimmer – Aurora

Hans Zimmer – Injection

Pathways to Heaven

Pathways to Heaven

11 October 2015

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Hush breathe not a word

The Nightingale tells secrets

Of our Hearts’ desires

.

The Nights spent breathing

Deep into your Soul’s essence

Velveteen kisses

.

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Blossoming pieces

Jigsaw puzzle of Heartpath

True flower of Life

.

Whisper into me

Secrets of your love’s fluids

Still under cover

.

I will show you stairs

Between every rib of me

Ladders you invent

.

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Follow the staircase

Build with me our ecstasy

Pathways to Heaven

.

Spend my day dreams soft

All I will keep is the change

When we traded Hearts

.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=D0HcRu3l0DU

Three, three like a tree

Three, three like a tree

2 October 2015

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Three of ecstasy

On my window sill knocking

They demand of me

.

Three hum like a bee

With light in me pervading

Third reality

.

Three engulfing me

Darkness its terrain losing

Lost fraternity

.

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Three wings high and free

Words without sound now bringing

Insomniac spree

.

Three, three like a tree

With roots in the Earth growing

Branches lost in me

.

Three, three, three just see

Staircase in me that winding

Spells eternity

.

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lmCBWGDXLf0

Reaching Heart Stillness

Reaching Heart stillness

23 September 2015

Tomasz Alen Kopera_07

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Winding reflections

Staircase to bottom of mind

Where thoughts lie piled up

.

Contrasting matters

Your spirit and your body

So disconnected

.

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I watch you battle

Your great mythical demons

Wrestling your own self

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I feel your spirit

Have held your bodily gait

For me they’ve blended

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Your body troubled

Feels only loss of control

Feels not connection

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How to reach your mind

Speak to it of the wonders

That lie within soul

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I count the bleak days

Awaiting your advancement

When we will walk free

.

I practise for now

Sole carrier of the bond

Reaching Heart stillness

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Images courtesy Thomasy Alen Capora using George Redhawk’s techniques to “see” art

Down the rabbit hole I fell

Down the rabbit hole I fell

20 July 2015

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 Daylight shone on all

As clocks of time unwound nights

Game of cards fell foul

Truth’s certainty was at play

Faith lives not within hearsay

 

The rooster crowed on

Oblivious to changing times

Its feathers ran thin

Old values all will forsake

For peacocks now call daybreak

 

Evening sun set calm

Upon all living creatures

Ensnared into dark

Soul’s footsteps may oft falter

As gold lays on the altar

 

The winding staircase

Led to dark bottomless pits

Where secrets lay bare

Down the rabbit hole I fell

Raking thoughts for show and tell

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sy2o6dzE9w8