Overcoming thoughts of you – Noir Blues, Cinematic Ambient, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

Overcoming thoughts of you – Noir Blues, Cinematic Ambient, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
24 May 2026
woman overcoming thoughts of a man sitting behind her in the shadows. She wears bold red, fine gold and blue coloured dress
Image credit: Magnific.com

## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

This poem reflects upon the slow grieving of a loved one as nature itself appears to echo the mourning through fading blossoms, dark tides and changing seasons. Beneath its melancholic atmosphere, it explores the gradual dissolution of sorrow, the endurance of memory and the quiet rebuilding of the self through introspection, artistic creation and emotional renewal.

The days fading fast
Into oblivion of nights
Detonation blast

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/11/22/overcoming-thoughts-of-you/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
I carried your hidden sights
into oblivion of nights
The days were fading so fast
A detonation for blast

[Verse]
The pining mind’s explosion
red ink like rust’s corrosion
Into realms of darkness creep
whispers of autumn skin deep

[Verse]
The widowed eyelids slow weep
as the sorrows in heart seep
Parting of the eyebrows raised
hold so softly the lost gaze

[Verse]
Sun kissed blossoms now fading
The crawling weeds invading
remnants of spring’s path dissolve
hopes of rebirth to resolve

[Verse]
Gardens decay in simmers
under a sun that glimmers
Dying rays hunt a wet kiss,
moments of forgotten bliss

[Chorus]
The brush strokes deftly in clues
Bold red, fine gold and blue hues
At last fading dream comes true
overcoming thoughts of You

[Verse]
Coal water flows down the hills
Black crows haunt my window sills
Dark tides flow slow into sands
like sea ice into Islands

[Verse]
The ebb and the flow pursue
shades of white in my mind’s blue
Erasure of the treasons
within the changing seasons

[Verse]
Hope of better morrows faint
in bosom’s heat from restraint
Reflux a lesson of tides
tireless experience confides

[Verse]
Eye rearranging the stills
Breathing through invented gills
dead fish in canvas to paint
though memories never to taint

[Chorus]
The brush strokes deftly in clues
Bold red, fine gold and blue hues
At last fading dream comes true
overcoming thoughts of You

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎸 Noir Blues version
Slow atmospheric blues with smoky emotional vocals, reverbed electric guitar and deep introspective mood
Overcoming thoughts of You – Noir Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version
A cinematic interpretation with reverbed piano, deep ambient textures emphasising atmosphere and melancholic mood.
Overcoming thoughts of You –Cinematic Ambient Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Noir Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
Overcoming thoughts of You –Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Atmospheric Blues, Dark Folk and Trip-Hop influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

You might also like: To love a shadow
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2026/05/22/to-love-a-shadow-noir-blues-dark-folk-dark-jazz-noir-trip-hop-versions-song-created-with-suno-my-lyrics-my-voice/

Shower me in rain – AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Folk, Indie Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice)

Shower me in rain – AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Folk, Indie Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice)
16 May 2026
woman with rain falling on her head and the skies parting shedding light on her head as she struggles in her path to spirituality
Image credit: Freepik.com

## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed this original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for an AI-generated song using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the AI-generated musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

This poem reflects upon the tension between an inward, deeply personal relationship with the Divine and the constraints that may arise from institutionalised forms of spirituality and religious authority. It explores how rigid systems of belief may prioritise conformity and submission over genuine inner elevation, reflection and spiritual awakening. The poem also considers how following an individual path toward spiritual truth may lead to isolation, misunderstanding and emotional suffering when confronted with collective expectations and established structures of thought.

Have it all
Bursting seams whispered
Pack in bulge
We indulge
Preserving by ingestion
All the holiness

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2020/02/11/shower-me-in-rain/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Bursting seams whispered pack in bulge
Have it all, eat, as we indulge
Ingestion preserved, I confess
swallowing hard all holiness

[Verse]
In moments of sighs, the respite
I breathe out the stains in the might
of the paths trodden so ghastly
Grudges held, forgiveness lengthy

[Verse]
Breathing in toxins speaks agony
What bosoms bore not in plenty
My scream hurls off dilated chests
my suffering held up in crests

[Chorus]
Of Love infinite, Land of Perth
in upward move rekindles birth
takes mind off, woodlands blazing pain
Soft heal me, shower me in rain

[Verse]
The words ripped off I reclaim eye
the shorn back, redemption in sky
whip up a new back to redeem
semblance of what I may then seem

[Verse]
Perfection, Art of plentiful
subtle nuances beautiful
Look within fallen chest that heaves
nothing for the mass just dried leaves

[Chorus]
Of Love infinite, Land of Perth
in upward move rekindles birth
Takes mind off, woodlands blazing pain
Soft heal me, shower me in rain

## 🎧 AI SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎸 Blues version
A blues interpretation emphasising raw emotion and expressive character.
Shower me in rain – AI Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🎬 Cinematic version
A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity.
Shower me in rain – AI Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🌾 Folk version
A folk interpretation of the song, focusing on acoustic textures and a more intimate, stripped-down sound that highlights the lyrical and emotional core.
Shower me in rain – AI Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🌿 Indie version
An indie interpretation with a softer, reflective tone, incorporating plaintive cello and violin sounds for a distinctive indie sound.
Shower me in rain – AI Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno AI, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Blues, Cinematic, Folk and Indie influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

You might also like: Tango to Centre
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2026/05/11/tango-to-centre-ai-song-blues-cinematic-indie-versions-suno-ai-my-lyrics-my-voice/

A deathly pallor – AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Gospel Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice)

A deathly pallor – AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Gospel Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice)
2 May 2026
woman with pale gaunt face demonstrating an inner struggle
Image credit: Freepik.com
## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed this original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for an AI-generated song using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the AI-generated musical version.


## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

This poem explores the unravelling of a self, shaped by excessive forgiveness, and the rebuilding required to become someone who no longer offers the other cheek..

Night’s sky breathed aloud
Jasmine like a streak of light
Called to the wild side
An intake of wilderness
Throbbed in my mind’s eye again

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2015/03/12/a-deathly-pallor/
## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Night’s sky breathed aloud so slight
Jasmine like a streak of light
called to the wild side earnest
An intake of wilderness
throbbed in my mind’s eye again
as it struggled within fen

[Verse]
The owl hooted once its plight
its cry silenced by the night
that prepared for coming doom
impending outcomes that loom
Knell rang on as I knelt riled
neither submissive nor wild

[Verse]
The rose felt its thorns to grate
through darkness that hid its gait
Pictures In reminiscence
shuddered with stark remembrance
Dropping against my mindscape
they plotted map for escape

[Chorus]
Remnants of us glowed afresh
ghostly ink against pink flesh
A deathly pallor unsightly
gaunt cheek though pale stood firmly
Its twin it offered no more
no retreating to before

[Verse]
The lanterns hissed out their sprites
as storms danced into their lights
Darkness then prevailed curtained
Cloak of night like a fog reigned
a while as I let it creep
within bosom bleak and deep

[Verse]
Winds blew their hearts forever
in clouds that scattered silver
Bright coins strewn in sky as dots
pennies would have outweighed thoughts
as they roamed without purpose
like eyes on giant argus

[Chorus]
Remnants of us glowed afresh
ghostly ink against pink flesh
A deathly pallor unsightly
gaunt cheek though pale stood firmly
Its twin it offered no more
no retreating to before



## 🎧 AI SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎸 Blues version
A blues interpretation emphasising raw emotion and expressive character.
A deathly pallor – AI Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🎬 Cinematic version
A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity.
A deathly pallor – AI Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
### 🙏 Gospel version
A gospel-inspired version focusing on expressive phrasing and spiritual depth.
A deathly pallor – AI Gospel Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno AI, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Blues, Cinematic and Gospel influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

You might also like: In the Peak of the Darkness
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2026/04/23/in-the-peak-of-the-darkness-ai-song-blues-cinematic-folk-indie-versions-suno-ai-my-lyrics-my-voice/

Remedy

Remedy

30 August 2017

Remedy George Redhawk
Courtesy George Redhawk

 

Image cut

On landscape of white

Sleek black ink

Trickeling

Down the white quill gyrating

Paper plane grating

 

Sink my thoughts

Tight little black knots

Chinese art

Subtle part

Finding the bud in the spots

Bloom of the morrow

 

Bring me snow

From ever rest bones

Pupil hones

Teacher’s tones

Valleys of music notes fly

The deserts’ ally

 

Wisp the hair

Starker the lashing

We will sing

Remedy

Voices between you and me

The chilly winds free

 

Reading of the poem : 

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Courtesy George Redhawk

 

 

Dogs of War – Blues Saraceno

Run on for a long time – Blues Saraceno

Carry me back Home – Blues Saraceno

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cypfadNtcXo

Cutting through Slices

Cutting through Slices

15 June 2017

slices George redhawk

 

Shifting node

In the mind’s spaces

Thought races

Embraces

Strings of unwoven laces

End the start faces

 

Star studded

Nights of never more

They whisper

Through Lisper

The thoughts becoming crisper

In sounds we thudded

 

Hovercraft

Through the mind we craft

Two by two

We go through

The door that heart entices

Cutting through Slices

 

Reading of the poem: 

Slices Mariusz Gajowniczek

Instrumental – Aye Malik Tere Bande Hum (Flute, Sitar & Santoor)

Instrumental – Megha Chayee Aadhi Raat (Sitar, Santoor & Flute)

Chandan Sa Badan Chanchal Chitwan (Sitar, Flute & Santoor)

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XKRBKT_W_Ic

The Cleopatra Tales 1: Divine Union – Hieros Gamos

The Cleopatra Tales 1: Divine Union – Hieros Gamos

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Dans la gloire qui périt dans les cendres de nos urnes / In glory perishing in ashes of our urns

Dans la gloire qui périt dans les cendres de nos urnes

(Poème écrit sous forme de sonnet occitan en vers Alexandrin. Traduit en anglais ci-dessous ou ici)

13 janvier 2017

christian-schloe-worx-shockblast
Courtesy Christian Schloe

 

De la lune nous voyons amas de faces obscures

De mille plaines érigées étendard argenté

De la veine essuyons larmes rouges en zébrures

Les faiblesses fustigées pâle sentier arpenté

 

Lendemains nous fuyons, points de croix en suture

De ces pages rédigées en mémoires présentées

En veine cave appuyons des doux cœurs écorchure

Les voltiges dirigées en falaises serpentées

 

Récolte-moi des abimes dans des terres désolées

Quand la nuit s’assombrit dans les pensées nocturnes

De nos souvenirs sublimes en presqu’îles isolées

 

Ravive lueur qui luit dans nos sursauts diurnes

Remontée des vieilles cimes en terrains décalés

Dans la gloire qui périt dans les cendres de nos urnes

 

Lecture du poème: 

christian-schloe-the-woman
Courtesy Christian Schloe

 

In glory perishing in ashes of our urns

(Translation of a poem written as a Occitan sonnet in Alexandrin. See original above or here)

13 January 2017

christian-schloe-mystic-light-by
Courtesy Christian Schloe

 

From the moon we now see clusters of dark faces

Thousand plains erected like a silvery flag

From the vein we will wipe a criss-cross of red tears

Weakness castigated pale pathway travelled through

 

The morrows that we flee, patchwork of cross stitches

From these pages written in memories displayed

On cava vein let’s press the sweet hearts abrasion

The directed vaulting into the winding cliffs

 

Harvest me from abyss in the desolate lands

When the night will darken in the nocturnal thoughts

From our sublime memories in lone peninsulas

 

Revive glimmer that shines in our diurnal jolts

Rise of old mountain tops in the staggered terrains

In glory perishing in ashes of our urns

 

Reading of the poem: 

christian-schloe-woman-head-in-clouds-and-bird
Courtesy Christian Schloe

Halfway out of the Dark – Aesthesys

Sailing to Byzantium – Aesthesys

I am Free that is why I am Lost – Aesthesys

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4tCgxhsz8tM

In my mind

In my mind

16-22 November 2016

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They walk unhindered

In my mind the mice are blind

They walk in trio

 

They cower then run

All good things under the sun

Sources diverted

 

They float like petals

In my mind the ice is kind

Blue sheets for the grave

 

They shiver they pray

All happenings just a play

Life’s scene invented

 

They call trains of thought

In my mind the trains rewind

Tracks of never more

 

They quiver they float

In corners of darkened throat

Constricting the voice

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy pinterest.com

No ordinary Love – Sade

 

Play upon the Heart that all will believe

Play upon the Heart that all will believe

7 January 2016

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Playful ghosts of you I keep them at bay

For I skimmed the Earth drank it full never

That no thoughts untrue my still mind may sway

On moss-ridden Hearth joist fool and clever

 

Competition rules the minds a dark fort

Yet this kiss so wane, pray concede me now

We will dance with fools bid their ships to port

Through the toil and pain that beaded the brow

 

I wiped away tire that kneaded me much

While the lakes and swans would gracefully flow

In death of a fire that needed much touch

Silent lip that warns disheartened and low

 

Play upon the Heart that all will believe

No mirth in the part a twin I will grieve

 

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Serenade – Schubert

Lacrimosa – Mozart

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k1-TrAvp_xs

Read me a story

Read me a story

8 December 2015

 

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Read me a story

Of crimson Tides’ arrival

Upon beating shores

 

Lull me to that hiss

The thoughts of morrows churning

Incandescent coal

 

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Read me a story

Of Times and of Music’s step

Walked in the starlight

 

Wake me to that bliss

Unmistakable yearning

Shadowing my soul

 

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Read me a story

Of lovers that never die

Etched in the morrows

 

Shake me lest I miss

Painful though sweet the birthing

Of my inner foal

 

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Tell me a Story – Phillip Phillips

Get up Get Down – Phillip Phillips

Gone, Gone, Gone – Phillip Phillips

Home – Phillip Phillips