A deathly pallor – AI Song (Blues, Cinematic, Gospel Versions) | Suno AI (my lyrics, my voice)
2 May 2026

## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed this original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for an AI-generated song using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the AI-generated musical version.


## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

This poem explores the unravelling of a self, shaped by excessive forgiveness, and the rebuilding required to become someone who no longer offers the other cheek..

Night’s sky breathed aloud
Jasmine like a streak of light
Called to the wild side
An intake of wilderness
Throbbed in my mind’s eye again

Read the full original poem here: 
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2015/03/12/a-deathly-pallor/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Night’s sky breathed aloud so slight
Jasmine like a streak of light
called to the wild side earnest
An intake of wilderness
throbbed in my mind’s eye again
as it struggled within fen

[Verse]
The owl hooted once its plight
its cry silenced by the night
that prepared for coming doom
impending outcomes that loom
Knell rang on as I knelt riled
neither submissive nor wild

[Verse]
The rose felt its thorns to grate
through darkness that hid its gait
Pictures In reminiscence
shuddered with stark remembrance
Dropping against my mindscape
they plotted map for escape

[Chorus]
Remnants of us glowed afresh
ghostly ink against pink flesh
A deathly pallor unsightly
gaunt cheek though pale stood firmly
Its twin it offered no more
no retreating to before

[Verse]
The lanterns hissed out their sprites
as storms danced into their lights
Darkness then prevailed curtained
Cloak of night like a fog reigned
a while as I let it creep
within bosom bleak and deep

[Verse]
Winds blew their hearts forever
in clouds that scattered silver
Bright coins strewn in sky as dots
pennies would have outweighed thoughts
as they roamed without purpose
like eyes on giant argus

[Chorus]
Remnants of us glowed afresh
ghostly ink against pink flesh
A deathly pallor unsightly
gaunt cheek though pale stood firmly
Its twin it offered no more
no retreating to before



## 🎧 AI SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎸 Blues version
A blues interpretation emphasising raw emotion and expressive character.
A deathly pallor – AI Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)

### 🎬 Cinematic version
A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity.
A deathly pallor – AI Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)

### 🙏 Gospel version
A gospel-inspired version focusing on expressive phrasing and spiritual depth.
A deathly pallor – AI Gospel Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno AI)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno AI, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Blues, Cinematic and Gospel influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

You might also like: In the Peak of the Darkness
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2026/04/23/in-the-peak-of-the-darkness-ai-song-blues-cinematic-folk-indie-versions-suno-ai-my-lyrics-my-voice/