Breaking through – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

Breaking through – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
27 September 2026
Woman's face breaking through a glass plane which looks like a mirror. You can see her left eye which looks intensely at the onlooker. Pieces of the glass are flying around her face. The colours are blue, brown, red, and soft greens
Image credit: Carnegriff on deviantart.com
## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Breaking through is never without cost. Between fractured mirrors, Saturn’s rings and the remnants of a dying dream, the self is broken open and gathered anew. Old bonds are breached, hidden wells become sources of power, and the search for an absent other turns inward. Beyond the crown, spear and cross, the saviour is discovered within — releasing the twin through the opening until what seemed divided remembers itself as whole.

Wandering
In thoughts that shiver
Cold of World
That darkens
She stitches another yarn
Pitch black before dawn

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/02/19/breaking-through/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Wandering in thoughts that shiver
Cold of World that darkens river
She stitches slow another yarn
a Yard of Pitch black before dawn

[Verse]
Other half like jigsaw puzzle
I pick up my pieces juggle
a mirror broken in the skies
where I see piercing through the lies

[Verse]
Through the bitterness, our hearts roam
Flowing salted tears like sea’s foam
lapping slow at our waking frames
engulfed in Humanity’s games

[Verse]
Illusion, Mind’s playground, blast wakes
I cry confusion as it shakes
Softly killing me he now sighs
as the lulling dreamtime slow dies

[Chorus]
Breaking through, it comes with a price
I have paid it now more than thrice
No haggling allowed, Nailed across
Trinity’s auction, crown, spear, cross

[Verse]
Souls on life’s fire often roast
I know life like butter on toast
and lemon just like Acid stings
Soaring flames fluttering like wings

[Verse]
I summon the stark Deadly rings
A ghostly place where he low sings
Songs of Unity, Working spells
constructed from my hidden wells

[Verse]
I conjure within Hammer’s might
Broken ties breached I take to flight
I am running free, a world won
This dream’s realm a slave’s marathon

[Verse]
The saviour lies but within me
My soul ushers in its twin free
He flutters through the Gaping hole
I sigh, finally we are whole

[Chorus]
Breaking through, it comes with a price
I have paid it now more than thrice
No haggling allowed, Nailed across
Trinity’s auction, crown, spear, cross

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version
Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes
Breaking through – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Ethereal Indie version
Ethereal Indie interpretation with a reflective tone, gentle piano, acoustic guitar and flute for a distinctive sound
Breaking through – Ethereal Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Mystical Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
Breaking through – Mystical Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie and Trip-Hop influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

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https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2026/07/01/stardust-ethereal-chillout-cinematic-dream-pop-trip-hop-versions-song-created-with-suno-my-lyrics-my-voice/

A Tale of two crowns (AI Suno song using my voice and my lyrics)

A Tale of two crowns (AI Suno song using my voice and my lyrics)
31 March 2026
Courtesy freepik.com


[Verse]
Fleeting touch before the grip
intensified as I dip
into your brightest essence
overjoyed by your presence
Spilling over countenance
your voice becomes my penance

[Verse]
Silent prayer abased nuns
Vow of silence verbose stuns
Who can cope with broken words
when the dusk is leading herds
into gardens of the dark
Gone is the light’s graceful spark

[Chorus]
Jasmine flowers by your sight
petals bloom through twined twilight
Bees and flies flutter afar
Mortal twin my rising star
Purple points to where we are
a Tale of Two Crowns at par

[Verse]
Night crawlers worship the skull
Lonely bones now carved so dull
Intricate architecture
adorning priesthood structure
Suns rise in confined spaces
crisp contours set on faces

[Verse]
All the pains they underwent
Sunsets and sunrises spent
as stoic brood-breeding mares
fitting tight in black white squares
Fences dense they keep them tight
fainting virgins lily white

[Chorus]
Jasmine flowers by your sight
petals bloom through twined twilight
Bees and flies flutter afar
Mortal twin my rising star
Purple points to where we are
a Tale of Two Crowns at par

[Verse]
Animated sacred heart
struggles to the time restart
of eras of knighthood toils
just to get the best of spoils
when it failed ‘twas mortified
laid down its crown and slow cried

[Chorus]
Jasmine flowers by your sight
petals bloom through twined twilight
Bees and flies flutter afar
Mortal twin my rising star
Purple points to where we are
a Tale of Two Crowns at par

“A Tale of two crowns” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Blues
“A Tale of two crowns” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Gospel
“A Tale of two crowns” AI Music song on youtube using Suno with my lyrics and my voice / Indie

Of heaving hearts with bitter mouths

Of heaving hearts with bitter mouths
16 November 2024
Courtesy freepik.com


An ear to hone to hear the blast
of time to bring from ages past
through shadows born from eyes downcast
of yesterday’s wenches to free

A crown on head to hold so still
for robin’s nest to bear a quill
future to write of banshee shrill
one to invoke a dark time

The people strived to find a place
twixt mind and heart they carved a space
for glory past not fall from grace
as their memories relented

The throngs were out their lungs on fire
They knew their circumstances dire
Now nothing left they could desire
No hope in their hearts kept empty

As the dark throngs would scream and leer
opposing crowds would laugh and cheer
and slowly all drummed up some fear
both hellbent on birth of riot

From sky to floor, nothing to mend
No grievance letter they could send
Excesses to counter the trend
of heaving hearts with bitter mouths


Written in the context of Ronovan writes Ovi Poetry challenge 74 using the word “cheer” as inspiration. For the rules and more poems, follow this link

Reading of the poem:
Path of Destiny – Saint of Sin

A new age dawned within the night

A new age dawned within the night
18 October 2024
Courtesy freepik.com


Wolves their claws did slowly sharpen
Hunters their long guns would snap in
What we never knew would happen
set in motion in a heartbeat

As the people failed several tests
the dark forces commenced arrests
with empty hearts and blazing chests
they spread their hate within the world

Of humans shaped a captive breed
they grappled with a dying creed
more hunger strikes more mouths to feed
a crown to tumble down and sway

The crowds the buildings set to blast
a sequence for the rage to last
and as the flames seared on steadfast
a new age dawned within the night



Written in the context of Ronovan writes Ovi poetry challenge. For more poems and the rules, please follow this link.

Reading of the poem:
Lil Wayne - Don't Cry ft. XXXTENTACION

Under the pink gases we lie

Under the pink gases we lie
25 September 2024
Courtesy freepik.com


Arrogant heads bear greying crown
their powers slowing at sundown
their shadows leaving their hometown
They make merry though face ashen

The will unbalanced blowing through
a thousand passages untrue
a maze through which blue sparrows flew
demented the mind stood at odds

Though morrow’s lights are uncertain
we know what lies behind curtain
we have a vow to ascertain
we, knights, with mission to endure

Never to forsake what we heard
from the lips of angels uttered
to free humans through spell and word
to balance is our task renewed

Times may lead us to disavow
from crippling acts that Earth do plough
scattering lives, we know not how
our vocation shorn by lost faith

Our appeal would shatter the sky
under the pink gases we lie
there is more than to lay down, die
pink will turn purple through our light

Reading of the poem:
Sarah Kinsley - Knights

Hanging tree now lit

Hanging tree now lit
18 February 2022
Courtesy Rodrigo Luff
Peasant ennobled
exalted by the honours
raised head to adorn

The stern church endowed
a bishop to coronate
head shaking off dust

The stance handed down
raised wild bodies to enthrone
forsaken the crown

Feet in the gravel
pebbles thrown in old fountains
arm to unravel

Sanction renewal
erect a hanging treetop
enable embers

Jubilatory
settle platinum attire
rekindle fire

Induct strong the grit
molten powder raises flames
hanging tree now lit

Reading of the poem:
Bad Wolves - Zombie
Written in the context of Ronovan writes weekly Haiku challenge using the words “crown”, “grit” and their synonyms. For more information or to read other poets’ contributions, please follow the link. 
https://ronovanwrites.com/2022/02/14/ronovan-writes-weekly-haiku-poetry-prompt-challenge-397-crown-and-grit/   

From knights of Jerusalem

From knights of Jerusalem

2 June 2017

Jerusalem Alabaster maggiesfam eu Garella
Courtesy Garella on Maggiesfam.eu

 

Lift me up

Through waters flutter

The minds roam

Through gutter

Where unworthy thoughts utter

Binding codes of dark

 

Drill me spark

In marble prairies

Where moons shine

White pristine

Alabaster diaries

Like sins of fairies

 

Twinkle through

The lost hearts mayhem

Wind me down

Bear me crown

From knights of Jerusalem

Banished past Salem

 

Reading of the poem: 

Jerusalem Alabaster en expertissim com
Courtesy P. Tosetti on expertissim.com

Shamanic Touch – Sufi’s Life

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qs4OTSdIeu8

Throw me words

Throw me words

16 November 2016

ghost ohbythewayblog blogspot com
Courtesy ohbthewayblog.blogspot.com

 

Fallen down

On concrete flooring

Reaching lows

Loosing flows

This blood cascading river

Cutting deep slowly

 

Breathe in me

Sounds of your return

The days cry

As I yearn

For your name to be printed

Across soul wilted

 

Sorrow’s clown

Pantomimes a thought

In my mind

Windmills grind

Sands grains that come loose sinking

Hopes of lost laughter

 

Morrows flee

Your shadow hovers

Moon covers

Pale lovers

Their sight building up in I

Living on a lie

 

Frozen crown

Plays with fire’s lace

In disgrace

Throw me words

Flocking sheep to their shepherds

Once upon a rhyme

 

Give up glee

Nothing left to see

Buy me time

Features grime

Mask the curse you gifted me

Break this death’s saunter

 

Reading of the poem: 

ghost truyen giatriso1 org
Courtesy pinterest.com

So Close – Olafur Arnalds feat. Arnor Dan

The colour of the night – Lauren Christy

It’s not goodbye – Laura Pausini

 

Waking Ophelia

Waking Ophelia

18 September 2016

ophelia-pinterest-com-6
Courtesy pinterest.com

 

She sleeps not

Slumber a migrant

Eyelids wane

Window pane

Glassy content of iris

Myriads of stories

 

Fragmented

Illusions of life

Power strife

Lost battles

Reminiscence of the spoils

Battlefield gargoyles

 

Self monsters

Darkness overcome

Or never

Mind clever

Constant crisscross of the word

Of puzzles unheard

 

Withered speech

The tongue bridge to breach

The outreach

A dark plunge

Like a drunken man will lunge

Into the bosom

 

Tales of ore

Constantly hammered

Crown jewels

Chest medal

In between a neck strangled

Studded star spangled

 

Throaty spells

Voicing world over

Sleep that dreams

Jolting bolt

The whiff of paraphilia

Waking Ophelia

 

Reading of the poem: 

ophelia-pinterest-com-7
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Daytime Dreamer – Omar Akram

Love of my Heart  -Omar Akram

Dancing with the Wind – Omar Akram

 

Heart shaped Polly gone

Heart shaped Polly gone

26 August 2016

Heart11
Courtesy pinterest.com

 

Handed down

Jewel of my Crown

Endless heads

Flower beds

Prairies tall as gardeners reek

Generations leak

 

Entrusted

To the mindless eyes

Decisions weigh

Mass unwise

Prairies fall as gardeners reap

Generations leap

 

Hands many

The traceless is One

Bring me back

My emblems

Shadows your darkness totems

From my dance all stems

 

Eyes cast down

Heavenly choices

The mind own

Heart bonded

Skies when questioned responded

With my purple hues

 

Speak to me

Of ageless morrows

Give me rhythm

Of your Heart

Wisdom my soul will impart

Into your twined suns

 

Ascension

Flight to the placeless

Elevate

Inside Frame

New geometry the game

Heart shaped Polly gone

 

Reading of the poem: 

heartpath zengarden com

Mandara – Vas & Azam Ali

Saphyrro – Vas & Azam Ali

Prayer for Soleil – Vas & Azam Ali

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zA_CkKjB_0U