Breaking through – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

Breaking through – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
27 September 2026
Woman's face breaking through a glass plane which looks like a mirror. You can see her left eye which looks intensely at the onlooker. Pieces of the glass are flying around her face. The colours are blue, brown, red, and soft greens
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Breaking through is never without cost. Between fractured mirrors, Saturn’s rings and the remnants of a dying dream, the self is broken open and gathered anew. Old bonds are breached, hidden wells become sources of power, and the search for an absent other turns inward. Beyond the crown, spear and cross, the saviour is discovered within — releasing the twin through the opening until what seemed divided remembers itself as whole.

Wandering
In thoughts that shiver
Cold of World
That darkens
She stitches another yarn
Pitch black before dawn

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/02/19/breaking-through/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Wandering in thoughts that shiver
Cold of World that darkens river
She stitches slow another yarn
a Yard of Pitch black before dawn

[Verse]
Other half like jigsaw puzzle
I pick up my pieces juggle
a mirror broken in the skies
where I see piercing through the lies

[Verse]
Through the bitterness, our hearts roam
Flowing salted tears like sea’s foam
lapping slow at our waking frames
engulfed in Humanity’s games

[Verse]
Illusion, Mind’s playground, blast wakes
I cry confusion as it shakes
Softly killing me he now sighs
as the lulling dreamtime slow dies

[Chorus]
Breaking through, it comes with a price
I have paid it now more than thrice
No haggling allowed, Nailed across
Trinity’s auction, crown, spear, cross

[Verse]
Souls on life’s fire often roast
I know life like butter on toast
and lemon just like Acid stings
Soaring flames fluttering like wings

[Verse]
I summon the stark Deadly rings
A ghostly place where he low sings
Songs of Unity, Working spells
constructed from my hidden wells

[Verse]
I conjure within Hammer’s might
Broken ties breached I take to flight
I am running free, a world won
This dream’s realm a slave’s marathon

[Verse]
The saviour lies but within me
My soul ushers in its twin free
He flutters through the Gaping hole
I sigh, finally we are whole

[Chorus]
Breaking through, it comes with a price
I have paid it now more than thrice
No haggling allowed, Nailed across
Trinity’s auction, crown, spear, cross

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version
Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes
Breaking through – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Ethereal Indie version
Ethereal Indie interpretation with a reflective tone, gentle piano, acoustic guitar and flute for a distinctive sound
Breaking through – Ethereal Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Mystical Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
Breaking through – Mystical Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie and Trip-Hop influences.

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Love token

Love token

5 May 2019

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Courtesy Christian Schloe

Two to tie

Within is without

Seven flags

Fly about

Rings of fire scorch the trees

Penitent on knees

 

Dragon’s lair

His smell in the air

Wings that lift

Nightly drift

Black holes guide to inner stare

His world here not there

 

Concealed might

Whispers in the night

He gifts me

Second sight

The Northern Star guides me right

My frame in his light

 

Magic tricks

Bosoms split in six

Spells that fix

Feathers mix

Bring together what was torn

One eyed king is born

 

Awoken

I am unbroken

He grants me

Love token

Three times soft words are spoken

His heart in my care

 

Spring has come

Lost weight of winter

Suns rays play

With my eye

From him I will never shy

Eagle of my sky

 

Reading of the poem:

Mute angels – Hammock

Cold front – Hammock

One Another – Hammock

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dh7WPfmlzBA

Seagulls Homecoming

Seagulls Homecoming

4 January 2017

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The grass blends

With the breeze of icicles

Sways within its gasps

 

Frozen white crystals

Partition of the fractals

Internal rings light

 

The snail is woven

Into shell of ringing Time

Blackbirds will flutter

 

Swallows in the sun

Moving through darker mists fly

In stillness the might

 

Daffodils shimmer

Through vibrations of sunshine

Inner bears outer

 

Moonbeams will glitter

In pitch-black diamonds glimmer

Shades of Netherland

 

Iris wells dilate

Mind in Heart diluting trend

Imploding explode

 

Wings of lark propel

In ocean of starry void

All stones to avoid

 

Dreamtime will consume

Ages of wings now growing

Seagulls Homecoming

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Day One – Audiomachine

Across the Horizon – Audiomachine

HomeComing – Audiomachine

 

Feed me the Music

Feed me the Music

8 October 2016

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Courtesy womaninthebible.net

 

 

Blood awash

From age of deceit

Travel clothes

Pleated neat

I walk naked in parlours

That the Truth harbours

 

End of lies

Raven to me flies

Beak tender

Wings of old

They shelter me from the cold

Of ice of despair

 

See my brow

No longer hangs now

Infinite

Waves of hope

Surging through the upward slope

Bubbling into moon

 

Crescents swoon

Overwhelming surge

Gnawing urge

Daylight purge

Silver and gold they emerge

Betrothed in the skies

 

Now we feast

All eyes on the East

Bread in yeast

Hides the Beast

Bring me the rings of knighthood

Three bowls made of wood

 

Calm hunger

Feed me the Music

Rushing through

Veins intact

Pulsing centuries impact

Hurtling through ages

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy pinterest.com

Sins of Salome – Angels of Venice

Nothing else Matters – Angels of Venice

Queen of the Sun – Angels of Venice

 

In the name of Love

In the name of Love

7 July 2016

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Courtesy David Galstyan on pinterest.com

Their vision scorched me

Thousand soldiers of darkness

Of untruth their flag

 

Is this as it is

The sum of all our hardships

Walking on the knees

 

I roamed the deserts

My hair running its own way

Talks of centuries

 

My shadows cast light

In the silence of their screams

As the widow dreams

 

They hardened their hearts

In the name of freedom’s rings

As their chains tightened

 

Martial waverings

Their walks valleys of despair

As orphans huddled

 

The suns in me tire

Of the cycles of tales dire

Reinventing hope

 

The blind men will grope

Their hands panic stricken tools

Their hearts emptiness

 

Power’s not prowess

Only throne of loneliness

Rotten arm in glove

 

When I live again

Walk with me in the valleys

In the name of Love

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Rassouli.com

Kafartu – Dhafer Youssef

Soupir Eternel – Dhafer Youssef

In the name of Love – Dhafer Youssef

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2t9KHSaJ_GY

Starlit rush

Starlit rush

4 July 2016

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Courtesy pinterest.com

 

Liquid gates

Open through the night

Ghostly hush

Starlit rush

Look into another world

Where stories unfurled

 

Spirit bound

Millenary oath

Smoky eyes

Bees and flies

Gravitate around me cloak

Rings of the lantern

 

Portals shut

The dream now dissolves

Back to ground

Inner growth

Only witness of lessons

Willingness to learn

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy hdwallpaper.com

Stardance – Yakuro

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=imw43ONByfA

Breaking through

Breaking through

19 February 2016

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Courtesy carnegriff deviantart.com

 

Wandering

In thoughts that shiver

Cold of World

That darkens

She stitches another yarn

Pitch black before dawn

 

Other half

Like jigsaw puzzle

I pick up

My pieces

A mirror broken in skies

Where I see through lies

 

Our hearts roam

Through the bitterness

Salted tears

Like sea’s foam

Lapping at our waking frames

Humanity’s games

 

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Courtesy carnegriff deviantart.com

 

A blast wakes

I cry as it shakes

Illusion

Mind’s playground

Softly killing me he sighs

As the dreamtime dies

 

I know life

Like butter on toast

And lemon

Acid stings

Souls on life’s fire often roast

Soaring flames like wings

 

Working spells

From my hidden wells

I summon

Deadly rings

A ghostly place where he sings

Songs of Unity

 

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Courtesy carnegriff deviantart.com

 

This dream’s realm

A slave’s marathon

I conjure

Hammer’s might

Broken ties I take to flight

I am running free

 

The saviour

Lies but within me

He flutters

Gaping hole

My soul ushers in its twin

Finally we’re whole

 

Breaking through

It comes with a price

Nailed across

No haggling

I paid it now more than thrice

Trinity’s auction

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy carnegriff deviantart.com

 

Little boy in the grass – Aurora

Conqueror – Aurora

Murder song – Aurora

Half the World away – Aurora

I hear you calling (ballad version) – Aurora

Running with the wolves – Aurora

 

Into the light – Aurora