Rebirth out of lies – Cinematic, Folk, Indie Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice) 2 June 2026
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS
I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.
## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM
Set in the twilight between what was and what is becoming, this poem traces a journey of inner transformation. Wings heal, hidden codes unravel, and the self is reforged through struggle and revelation. Guided by an inner voice that chooses creation over conflict, it celebrates the quiet alchemy that turns hardship into beauty and gives rise to a new way of seeing the world.
They beat fast The heart’s pulsations At the throat Like a bird When the clipped wings have grown back First flight to freedom
[Verse] They beat fast the heart’s pulsations at the throat, like bird’s convulsions When clipped wings have lastly grown back first flight to freedom from closed track
[Verse] Twenty-three pairs now unfolding coils floating, twisting and turning The changes, they don’t come easy forging another one leesy
[Chorus] Within the twilight unfolding Like a novel of Sir Golding The true heart sees all that begins Rebirth out of lies, wager wins
[Verse] Decoded secrets of my spine Time for peace not war I opine cast skirmishes as I retreat Talk wonders in the surging heat
[Verse] I am sword forged in cool iron Liquefied Blue matter to turn weapon through my cutting edges beaten white upon life’s ridges
[Verse] Create word says my inner voice The poet composes all joys From gutter makes bed of roses content that beauty imposes
[Chorus] Within the twilight unfolding Like a novel of Sir Golding The true heart sees all that begins Rebirth out of lies, wager wins
## 🎧 SUNO SONG
Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:
### 🎬 Cinematic version A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity. Rebirth out of lies – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Folk version A folk interpretation of the song, focusing on acoustic textures and a more intimate, stripped-down sound that highlights the lyrical and emotional core. Rebirth out of lies – Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Indie version An indie interpretation with a softer, reflective tone, incorporating plaintive cello and violin sounds for a distinctive indie sound. Rebirth out of lies – Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS
This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Folk and Indie influences.
Female wisdom slows down the fight 27 October 2024
They hoarded from river to sea homes not for them so tirelessly as broken throngs just had to flee usurped lands cannot be taken
As they looked for love and respect the tides turned on debased regret although they were told not to fret their losing path carved itself dark
Trump to trump with a winning card wrong male policies to discard intruders are leveled down hard female wisdom slows down the fight
Written in the context of Ronovan writes Ovi Poetry challenge using the word “respect” as the inspiration. For more poems and rules, follow this link :
Harbinger
of erased nation
A death toll
on both sides
leads nowhere as the fear rides
to uneven poll
the clock strikes
unequal death chimes
we surmount
the war crimes
our memory a closed tap
bodies our minds wrap
Live cocoons
shelter vivid thoughts
unwilling
uncaring
we see not what then transpired
as thousands expired
Fed through spoons
weather-beaten words
Flimsy talks
forceful walks
to the other side of hope
a yearning to cope
Warning call
lost time to recall
regret stitched
intimate
within layers of the brain
lesson to retain
The legs pace
unknown surfaces
riddled lanes
absorb pains
of humanity’s disgrace
all blood same red lace
Reading of the poem:
Crescent moon
Glistens on treetops
Blowing winds
Change the skies
Cloudy landscapes meet our eyes
Decanting pearl drops
Humans rise
Multiple tasks shake
Their dark ribs
As they stir
Notions of a foregone Time
While the war bells chime
The ground spills
Red waters that slide
They know not
Colours’ calls
Crimson landscapes cut our falls
To touch, not divide
Reading of the poem:
They flaunted new bodies they’d seized25 December 2021
Courtesy jenisecook.com
They took the rules as a set trend
they bent on knee in submission
They made of the quest a mission
each to each hero and new friend
Their souls to heavens would ascend
one by one their bodies released
as their breath in their chests decreased
Consciousness moved to other spheres
releasing behind all the fears
they flaunted new bodies they’d seized
Reading of the poem:
ERA - Ameno (Official Music Video)
Written in the context of Ronovanwrites Decima challenge.
In a Decima, there are 10 lines of poetry that rhyme and there must be 8 syllables per line.
There is a Set Rhyming Pattern we must stick to: ABBAACCDDC or ABBA/ACCDDC.
For this prompt No 89, we must have “friend” in the A rhyme line
For more tips and other contributions please follow this link here https://ronovanwrites.com/2021/12/22/ronovan-writes-decima-poetry-challenge-prompt-no-89-friend-in-the-a-rhyme-line/
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