Ashes for daughters – Cinematic, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice) 13 August 2026
## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS
I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.
## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM
Ashes for daughters is a lament for mothers whose lives have been reduced to survival by war. Inspired primarily by the tragedy unfolding in Palestine yet echoing countless conflicts where civilians bear the heaviest burden, the song is not about armies or politics, but about human loss. Through the eyes of one woman carrying grief, memory and an unbroken maternal love, it gives voice to those who continue walking despite the ashes around them with the hope that one day the cycle of war will end.
She walks slow life bundled on back Agony her fiefdom, mind scattered throughout waters, thoughts a procession
[Verse] She walks slow, life bundled on back Agony her fiefdom, so black Mind scattered throughout the waters, thoughts a procession that falters
[Verse] They deal blow never cut her slack Trinity not random, to stack Houses flaming as their hearts lurch Children’s school, hospital and church
[Chorus] Two may die. May they ever live for their fathers’ tales to forgive She cries as her lung deep inhales ashes for daughters as she wails
[Verse] She faces it with beaten brow Heart crushed though face never to bow In her soul lights a burning fire Orphaned twin stokes fleeting desire
[Chorus] Two may die. May they ever live for their fathers’ tales to forgive She cries as her lung deep inhales ashes for daughters as she wails
## 🎧 SUNO SONG
Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:
### 🎬 Cinematic version Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes Ashes for daughters – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Trip-Hop version A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth Ashes for daughters – Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS
This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic and Trip-Hop influences.
I am just one breath from a thousand voices19 November 2023
Courtesy pinterest.com
I am the vestige of a fake sermon
the redeemer of a so-called vermin
the fate of which they will determine
heads or tails, palms would examine
I am a slowly revived olive tree
My gentle farmers rekindle me
their dreams of liquid green honey
set in their dead eyes that no longer see
My fruit hangs on the West Bank
where every corner smells death dank
metal on their heads lands with a clank
they think my keepers they outrank
I am a call for prayer in their lost homes
to Jerusalem, Rome and all those golden domes
The mind of each in inner turmoil roams
as fire every inch of their land combs
I am just one breath from a thousand voices
seeping through clenched teeth’s brittle noises
exhaled from tight chests pressed in dead choices
while inhuman armada in kids’ blood rejoices
Reading of the poem:
حريتي حريتي حريتي بيدي حريتي يا مبدئي حريتي برسالتي حريتي يا غايتي حريتي بثورتي حريتي يا أملي حريتي مقاومتي حريتي لون بنفسجي حريتي سيل دمي حريتي يا ويلتي حريتي تحت جثتي
قراأت الشعر
Abeer Nehme - عبير نعمة - Fi Asfour
English translation
My freedom is under my corpse
3 November 2023
My freedom, my freedom
My freedom is by my hand
My freedom, my guiding principle
My freedom is in my message
My freedom, my goal
My freedom is in my revolution
My freedom, my hope
My freedom is my resistance
My freedom is a colour purple
My freedom is my blood
My freedom, woe to me
My freedom is under my corpse
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