Do you see – Cinematic, Indie Folk, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

Do you see – Cinematic, Indie Folk, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
10 June 2026
woman with rose in her hair and a crescent moon. She is blue like her mood and adorned like a goddess
Image credit: Eloesh.com

## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Woven from memory, symbolism and lived experience, this song explores the hidden connections between past wounds and future becoming. Through images of moonlit waters, shifting colours, childhood sketches and distant stars, it traces a journey across love, alienation, loss and transformation. As fragments once scattered begin to reconnect, sorrow itself becomes part of a larger pattern, revealing the possibility of renewal within the landscapes of memory.

Do you see
The falling memories
They build lakes
Steeped in blue
The hue of moonshine
She and I were two

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/01/23/do-you-see/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Do you see the falling memories?
They build lakes hue of moonshine frees
Steeped in blue, she and I were two
To opposite corners we flew

[Verse]
Did you know, inevitable
Red meets blue and the tunes purple
Fusion of the phoenix flashes
birth crimson, rising from ashes

[Verse]
Child in me picks up drawing ink
Squaring planes, circles twined that sink
the slits into the soul once torn
Profusion of connections drawn

[Verse]
You are blind, like we were once deaf
Our worlds shut firm like a tight breath
exhaling from compressed lips pursed
Landscapes of sorrow for accursed

[Chorus]
Do you see the wasted morrows
Swarms of bees suckling pristine rose
They sink ships within hidden hues
inducing sprouting of my Blues

[Verse]
The silence, communication
all dead words of alienation
My dark shadows now lost in cloud
Nine a mere number in white shroud

[Verse]
In your mind your thoughts roam alone
muddled in concrete, path of stone
The highways grey crumbs left behind
bricks for the tender, ropes for blind

[Verse]
Trick or treat? Guessing overstayed
Time precious often underpaid
Ticks sucking red drops of life browse
amusement parks themes to espouse

[Verse]
Dark playgrounds, I seldom choose black
Foot ventures not on a dead track
yet may slip, misplaced wandering
through circles full and shapes curving

[Chorus]
Do you see the wasted morrows
Swarms of bees suckling pristine rose
They sink ships within hidden hues
inducing sprouting of my Blues

[Verse]
Truth and lies rapid doubts impose
Tilting sceneries wilting rose
Proximity’s timed right playthings
uncovered stuffed toys for musings

[Verse]
Revered distant star, bask in light
Guide our steps through North, twinkle bright
Six blue feet under, lost the fight
We honour your corpse buried tight

[Verse]
Thieves plunder jewels of your chest
Cast a spell, the walls hearts arrest
between words plastered and song spell
haul more, exhibit, show and tell

[Verse]
Hymns for the dead clues for the child
imagination running wild
Clock ticks, talks, language spelt or read
My aim is to keep a clear head

[Chorus]
Do you see the wasted morrows
Swarms of bees suckling pristine rose
They sink ships within hidden hues
inducing sprouting of my Blues
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## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic version
A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity.
Do you see– Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Indie Folk version
An Indie Folk interpretation of the song, focusing on acoustic textures and a more intimate sound that highlights the lyrical and emotional core.
Do you see – Indie Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
Do you see –Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie Folk and Trip-Hop influences.

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Mutation intent

Mutation intent

13 May 2017

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Listen to the rain

It flows washing the sorrows

To castles in Spain

 

Redraw the sources

Map a treehouse in ether

Where clouds will find home

 

Unlearn the lessons

Chemistry in Alpha bent

Mutation intent

 

Reading of the poem:  

The Past Disappears – Bvdub

 

Messenger

Messenger

4 January 2017

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Courtesy Edward Poynter

 

Birth in stars

Growth in the moonshine

Blessed in wine

Sleek pristine

From gift of birth do not dine

Polluted alters

 

Sing story

Slow the candle light

Bring the sight

Slow the might

Sorrows empty change delight

Reversing altars

 

Voices ring

Ear deciphering

Messenger

Carries weight

Of parcels deliverance gait

Wading through waters

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Waterhouse John William

The Messenger – Audiomachine

Prologue & Birth – Audiomachine

Hope and Glory – Audiomachine

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hYvT0_ObPvA

Blended illusion

Blended illusion

14 November 2016

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Three to one

Sorted confusion

Our limbs meet

Green hilltops

Slopes sliding through the morrows

Forged in the sorrows

 

Priest and nun

Thwarted diffusion

Our bones sweep

Blue graveyards

Where the look takes to the kill

Bodies lying still

 

Hopes are torn

When the children die

Pennies lie

Change wasted

The smiles on our mouth pasted

With gruesome dark glue

 

Blink I’m gone

Remnants of pieces

Skin hanging

Rose petals

Showering your pale body

As the sound subsides

 

Wild horse rides

Peaks of never more

Wave broken

On the shore

The hurt still throbbing and sore

Wrists red though uncut

 

The eyes shut

Blended illusion

Surging through

Blue temple

Your breath warm as I tremble

My way through your chest

 

Reading of the poem: 

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The Trees – Max Richter

The Tree the Beach the Sea – Max Richter

This Bitter Earth / On the Nature of Daylight  – Max Richter / Dinah Washington

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jXHGoaEtmFM

A book for shelf a loss of Art

A book for shelf a loss of Art

7 August 2016

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Time to depart silent chest heaves

Tears of morrows when bluebirds call

Afresh the start as wind blows leaves

Raked in sorrows hearts don’t recall

 

Wish me pennies from heaven’s purse

The lips have shut secrets buried

Call me Denise then swear and curse

Uncensored cut movies hurried

 

We will play game of peak and boo

Like meek blue elf I fit the part

A mind to shame in who is who

 

A book for shelf a loss of Art

Excuses lame to see me through

I will myself naïve and tart

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Hush Little Baby – The Horse Flies

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0fdEcJ-dfs8

The Love grows within

The Love grows within

11 June 2016

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People hold

The woes at arms’ length

They confess

Wrongdoings

The priest a pail of water

Washing away sin

 

Through the din

Of voices spilling

The chilling

Careless minds

Owning up a lost concept

Remorse ne’er teeth grinds

 

The waters

Wash away matter

The unclaimed

Cast treasures

Of inner content measures

Declining substance

 

Stretched so thin

The souls a shadow

Of lost hope

Blind justice

The mouth but tool to practise

False words of regret

 

The victims

The ghosts of the self

The gaze bleak

As they speak

Of accumulated hurt

Until the night falls

 

Day’s respite

Within the sorrows

Invented

Outer world

Mirrors of inner torment

As dark faces light

 

Mind creates

From pool of battles

The ripple

Unending

The battlefield heart-rending

We fight but ourselves

 

Learn balance

The heart speaks clearly

Yet the mind

Clings dearly

Known fields appeasing kingdoms

Though they spell bloodshed

 

It trickles

Drop after drop flows

Till the end

When hearts mend

The cup a humble chalice

The flow endless stream

 

The seeker

Walks in white penance

Within dream

Through unseen

The journey a star filled trek

Through the wilderness

 

Fading steps

In realms of the void

Of reasons

Self devoid

Only knowing acceptance

The why matters not

 

When hearts rule

The kingdoms flourish

Each bastion

A limb cast

Inner nurturing outer

The Love grows within

 

Reading of the poem: 

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This beautiful gif is courtesy Samuel Viani on samuelviani.com

Say I am You – Rumi

The Eternal Ecstasy – Rumi

Look at Love – Rumi

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HE0iPf8Kq2k

Every magic word

Every magic word

15 May 2016

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Our burdens

The sum of sorrows

We carry

Their dead gait

Knees caving under the weight

Of wasted morrows

 

Open heart

Let the sorrow drip

Like the rain

Kissing Earth

See in their embrace rebirth

Of inner children

 

We were once

The kings of playgrounds

Our chests bare

Laid down hair

The dark stringent marks of Time

Still unwoven threads

 

Soul carefree

We danced with the winds

That shook fierce

All the fires

Within heart carving desires

The mind a wild bird

 

Bleak routine

Settling in with hooks

Anchored us

Rooted feet

Day by day we faced defeat

Of the larky times

 

The dreams dreamt

They are lost in mists

Read in books

Blown in winds

Paper scattered now rescinds

Every magic word

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Profumo di donna – Enrico Rava

Mi ritorni in mente – Enrico Rava

Spleen – Enrico Rava and Richard Galliano

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJN_Tfaj_KI

Soul Hacker

Soul Hacker

15 January 2016

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The Garden

Green leaves abounding

Sets its sails

Towards hope

Distances mere fantasy

Playground of the mind

 

Your shadow

Extending its weight

Luminous

Immense shores

Flowing across my mindscape

My oceans borders

 

Sight of you

Iridescent plains

Straddling light

Tucked in tight

Within flowing dark waters

Aquatic desert

 

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Your fingers

Tentacles’ axis

Entwined lines

Curving braids

The bottom of emptiness

Fullness of sorrows

 

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Your dark eyes

A wane wishing well

Fate’s crossroads

Twenty-three

Winding and lost lonely streets

Bordering morrows

 

Your essence

Darkness and thunder

Pennies’ rain

Hammer’s breath

Light and honey inside pain

Whispers of the night

 

All of you

A fear free wonder

Soul Hacker

Hijacker

Tugging at strings of my self

Mutating my core

 

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Gif image courtesy George Redhawk found on imgur.com

 

Taal se Taal Mila with English subs – Alka Yagnik and Udit Narayan Jha

Virtual Insanity – Jamiroquai

Wide Awake – Katy Perry

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=k0BWlvnBmIE

Blood in the moonlight

Blood in the moonlight

12 December 2015

 

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The dark rasping sounds

Heaving darkness closing in

Respite in sleep’s loss

 

The night spoke whispers

Into the Heart of sorrow

Laying in dungeons

 

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Irresolute paths

Between truths and concealments

Roads to perdition

 

Sleeveless in winter

For Heart to wear but in cloak

Through blistering storms

 

Crystal clear ripples

She forged a way in waters

Through liquid portals

 

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Doors closed tight across

Waning memories that lurched

From bowels to throat

 

Shutting out the screams

Hell’s kitchen let out oozing

Blood in the moonlight

 

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Love’s Way – Human Drama

I Bleed For You – Human Drama

A Million Years- Human Drama

Oh My Love – Human Drama

 

 

 

Before it escapes my reach

Before it escapes my reach

7 December 2015

 

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This vanishing world

I want to swallow its fluff

Morrows’ candy threads

 

Let them glue me pink

Upon my eternal blue

Rainbows’ beginnings

 

Deep within my soul

I want to lock its treasures

Relish them in chest

 

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Courtesy asianetindia.com

 

 

The throbbing stillness

Lies wake in me through Night’s sleep

Breath in me serene

 

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The Sun rises East

Waking new Worlds to the Dawn

That births in Sorrows

 

Farewell to the world

Heaves in my blossoming Heart

As it lulls the Tides

 

I touch it fading

Before it escapes my reach

Into Oblivion

 

 

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Before the Dawn – Evanescence

 

 

 

I thought I should share what sunrise looks like from my balcony so added this as an afterthought. I am yet to take a full video of the time from night to dawn and transform it into a timelapse piece. Meanwhile I hope you like the below:

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