Do you see – Cinematic, Indie Folk, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

Do you see – Cinematic, Indie Folk, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
10 June 2026
woman with rose in her hair and a crescent moon. She is blue like her mood and adorned like a goddess
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Woven from memory, symbolism and lived experience, this song explores the hidden connections between past wounds and future becoming. Through images of moonlit waters, shifting colours, childhood sketches and distant stars, it traces a journey across love, alienation, loss and transformation. As fragments once scattered begin to reconnect, sorrow itself becomes part of a larger pattern, revealing the possibility of renewal within the landscapes of memory.

Do you see
The falling memories
They build lakes
Steeped in blue
The hue of moonshine
She and I were two

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/01/23/do-you-see/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Do you see the falling memories?
They build lakes hue of moonshine frees
Steeped in blue, she and I were two
To opposite corners we flew

[Verse]
Did you know, inevitable
Red meets blue and the tunes purple
Fusion of the phoenix flashes
birth crimson, rising from ashes

[Verse]
Child in me picks up drawing ink
Squaring planes, circles twined that sink
the slits into the soul once torn
Profusion of connections drawn

[Verse]
You are blind, like we were once deaf
Our worlds shut firm like a tight breath
exhaling from compressed lips pursed
Landscapes of sorrow for accursed

[Chorus]
Do you see the wasted morrows
Swarms of bees suckling pristine rose
They sink ships within hidden hues
inducing sprouting of my Blues

[Verse]
The silence, communication
all dead words of alienation
My dark shadows now lost in cloud
Nine a mere number in white shroud

[Verse]
In your mind your thoughts roam alone
muddled in concrete, path of stone
The highways grey crumbs left behind
bricks for the tender, ropes for blind

[Verse]
Trick or treat? Guessing overstayed
Time precious often underpaid
Ticks sucking red drops of life browse
amusement parks themes to espouse

[Verse]
Dark playgrounds, I seldom choose black
Foot ventures not on a dead track
yet may slip, misplaced wandering
through circles full and shapes curving

[Chorus]
Do you see the wasted morrows
Swarms of bees suckling pristine rose
They sink ships within hidden hues
inducing sprouting of my Blues

[Verse]
Truth and lies rapid doubts impose
Tilting sceneries wilting rose
Proximity’s timed right playthings
uncovered stuffed toys for musings

[Verse]
Revered distant star, bask in light
Guide our steps through North, twinkle bright
Six blue feet under, lost the fight
We honour your corpse buried tight

[Verse]
Thieves plunder jewels of your chest
Cast a spell, the walls hearts arrest
between words plastered and song spell
haul more, exhibit, show and tell

[Verse]
Hymns for the dead clues for the child
imagination running wild
Clock ticks, talks, language spelt or read
My aim is to keep a clear head

[Chorus]
Do you see the wasted morrows
Swarms of bees suckling pristine rose
They sink ships within hidden hues
inducing sprouting of my Blues
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## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic version
A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity.
Do you see– Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Indie Folk version
An Indie Folk interpretation of the song, focusing on acoustic textures and a more intimate sound that highlights the lyrical and emotional core.
Do you see – Indie Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
Do you see –Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie Folk and Trip-Hop influences.

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Between two rivers

Between two rivers
7 May 2023
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I cast rope
fishing for other outcomes
My heart hope
beating drums
to mathematical sums
the curse overcomes

It distends
beyond body sends
knowledge tool
Special school
star born generations rule
the circle extends

My mind’s slates
horizons dilates
pushing through 
Eye’s quivers
stories the soul delivers
between two rivers

Reading of the poem: 
Messages From Above :: Joel Kanning

Love never fails you

Love never fails you

5 April 2017

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Look through whim

Shattering the rim

Of the hymn

Through the dim

Light breaking apart the sim

Cities come through him

 

Known better

I wrote a letter

I met her

Fate wetter

From crumpled heaps I utter

More than I stutter

 

Pull me through

The melodies hue

Seeking who

I know true

The knowledge that grows in two

Love never fails you

 

Reading of the poem:

 

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Give me your eyes – Brandon Heath

I’m not who I was – Brandon Heath

Jesus in disguise – Brandon Heath

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6VEyouQhBtY

Alternate realities

Alternate realities

1 October 2015

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Illusion spread dark

Within remnants of true sight

Less light I behold

.

No blank slate to draw

I lose more than I would own

Drift in conclusion

.

The seeker spirals

Wake of dawn brings more than light

Wings flapping upwards

.

My essence I know

From blue world it appeared slight

Timeless adjustment

.

Losing airborne frame

Cast into a sightless world

Mutation of Heart

.

Remnants of vision

Alternate realities

Meet my perplexed eye

.

Choice? A leap of faith

Death is the road to wonders

That my soul creates

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RxabLA7UQ9k