I draw the same lines – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

I draw the same lines – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
2 October 2026
A contorted body bending backwards that is traversed by light or fire that goes through it and becomes mist on the other side
Image credit: George Redhawk
## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Between writer’s block and the imperfect passage from one mind to another, I draw the same lines explores the struggle to turn thought into something that can be shared. Words stutter through narrow keyholes while memory, conformity and assumption cloud what we understand. Yet ink continues to fall, hands guide new lines and familiar truths emerge through different forms. Across the broken tides of communication, we return again and again to the attempt — drawing, redefining and learning how to make ourselves understood.

White paper
Suffocates my words
Like water
Thrown to herds
They drink long in blind consent
No thought of dissent

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/08/30/i-draw-the-same-lines/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
White paper suffocates my words
Like cold water thrown to the herds
They drink so long in blind consent
harbouring no thought of dissent

[Verse]
Amnesic, we will not find faults
in Turkish baths we take the salts
of our pores now sweating the malts
Of drunken stupor mind exalts

[Verse]
Mnemonic, Technical glitches
The Words keyholes that Mind stitches
through which I then had them stuttered
lengthily Bred and but uttered

[Chorus]
Every Time I land on your shore
like an ode sung to never more
My streams flung like a broken Tide
I draw the same lines my hands guide

[Verse]
My inks flow, like blackened raindrops
from skies hole to console the crops
The children of our stark yearning
born from beaten quills still learning

[Verse]
Dissolved frills, Stark truths face the wise
New definitions to surmise
Bloodied burning paths, Assumption
Beating breath in slow consumption

[Chorus]
Every Time I land on your shore
like an ode sung to never more
My streams flung like a broken Tide
I draw the same lines my hands guide

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version
Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes
I draw the same lines– Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Ethereal Indie version
Ethereal Indie interpretation with a reflective tone, gentle piano, acoustic guitar and flute for a distinctive sound
I draw the same lines – Ethereal Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Mystical Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
I draw the same lines – Mystical Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie and Trip-Hop influences.

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I draw the same lines

I draw the same lines

30 August 2016

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White paper

Suffocates my words

Like water

Thrown to herds

They drink long in blind consent

No thought of dissent

 

Amnesic

We will not find faults

Turkish baths

Take the salts

Of our pores sweating the malts

Of drunken stupor

 

Mnemonic

Technical glitches

Mind stitches

Words keyholes

Through which I had them stuttered

Bred and but uttered

 

My inks flow

Like blackened raindrops

From skies hole

To console

The children of our yearning

Born from beaten quills

 

Dissolved frills

Stark truths face the wise

To surmise

Assumption

Beating breath in consumption

Bloodied burning paths

 

My hands guide

Like a broken Tide

Every Time

On your shore

Like an ode to never more

I draw the same lines

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Keep you close – dEUS

Bad Timing – dEUS

Serpentine – dEUS

Include me Out – dEUS

The Magic Hour – dEUS

Little Arithmetics – dEUS

 

Jerusalem’s lost Ark wind

Jerusalem’s lost Ark wind

16 November 2015

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Swollen Polygon

My Heart shaped Geometry

On which side to draw

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Numbers dance hidden

Chance law of art’s memory

Fear outcome curse fades

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Loved ones’ blood flesh tears

Angry steel violence clinch

Evening rain, fragile fall

.

Women dancing star

Wash sadness from soldiers’ eyes

Stone faces missing

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Invisible ones

Scream loud, torture unsaid sing

Own freedom bitter

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Dead dance supports graves

Mother dancing wages joy

Foreign laugh anguish

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Humble Pi curve Arc

Kingdoms cover in bell shape

Secluded valleys

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Protect victories

King’s vanity broken works

Lost ancient city

.

Build Ocean’s Rainbows

Jerusalem’s lost Ark wind

April’s histories

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Moon ruins footstep

Dried ambition dust prison

Desert life over

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Stop man’s Dominions

Love fall’s million stars

Distant planet’s fog

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Shape of my Heart – Sting

Fragile – Sting

They Dance Alone – Sting

Lost without You – Sting

Yellow Sunflower

Yellow Sunflower
31 October 2015

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Yellow Sunflower
Always turns towards the sun
When it scorches most

It is the nature
Of flowers that draw on sun
To set it ablaze

Sunflowers retain
Through dazzling yellow pitch black
That draws in sun’s rays

Even sun must die
Small deaths over horizon
But rise shine again

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Alternate realities

Alternate realities

1 October 2015

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Illusion spread dark

Within remnants of true sight

Less light I behold

.

No blank slate to draw

I lose more than I would own

Drift in conclusion

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The seeker spirals

Wake of dawn brings more than light

Wings flapping upwards

.

My essence I know

From blue world it appeared slight

Timeless adjustment

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Losing airborne frame

Cast into a sightless world

Mutation of Heart

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Remnants of vision

Alternate realities

Meet my perplexed eye

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Choice? A leap of faith

Death is the road to wonders

That my soul creates

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RxabLA7UQ9k