I draw the same lines – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

I draw the same lines – Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
2 October 2026
A contorted body bending backwards that is traversed by light or fire that goes through it and becomes mist on the other side
Image credit: George Redhawk
## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Between writer’s block and the imperfect passage from one mind to another, I draw the same lines explores the struggle to turn thought into something that can be shared. Words stutter through narrow keyholes while memory, conformity and assumption cloud what we understand. Yet ink continues to fall, hands guide new lines and familiar truths emerge through different forms. Across the broken tides of communication, we return again and again to the attempt — drawing, redefining and learning how to make ourselves understood.

White paper
Suffocates my words
Like water
Thrown to herds
They drink long in blind consent
No thought of dissent

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/08/30/i-draw-the-same-lines/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
White paper suffocates my words
Like cold water thrown to the herds
They drink so long in blind consent
harbouring no thought of dissent

[Verse]
Amnesic, we will not find faults
in Turkish baths we take the salts
of our pores now sweating the malts
Of drunken stupor mind exalts

[Verse]
Mnemonic, Technical glitches
The Words keyholes that Mind stitches
through which I then had them stuttered
lengthily Bred and but uttered

[Chorus]
Every Time I land on your shore
like an ode sung to never more
My streams flung like a broken Tide
I draw the same lines my hands guide

[Verse]
My inks flow, like blackened raindrops
from skies hole to console the crops
The children of our stark yearning
born from beaten quills still learning

[Verse]
Dissolved frills, Stark truths face the wise
New definitions to surmise
Bloodied burning paths, Assumption
Beating breath in slow consumption

[Chorus]
Every Time I land on your shore
like an ode sung to never more
My streams flung like a broken Tide
I draw the same lines my hands guide

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version
Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes
I draw the same lines– Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌿 Ethereal Indie version
Ethereal Indie interpretation with a reflective tone, gentle piano, acoustic guitar and flute for a distinctive sound
I draw the same lines – Ethereal Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Mystical Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
I draw the same lines – Mystical Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie and Trip-Hop influences.

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In the gold of alchemist

In the gold of alchemist

8 August 2017

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Courtesy Synergetic Qabala

 

Shining lines

Covet lightened shrines

Come hither

We cloak selves

In the gold of alchemist

Leaving copper trail

 

Trade my faith

Thousand bolts under

Thunder’s call

Tall to wraith

The subdued versions recall

Memories of the fall

 

September

Will bring me ember

Of moon’s death

Slow sun’s breath

A tale to remake amber

Jaded tiger’s eyes

 

Reading of poem: 

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Courtesy Synergetic Qabala

In search – Manish Vyas

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qeCbfofF6G4

Ascension

Ascension

28 April 2017

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Courtesy Christian Schloe

 

Dimension

Of my fading lines

Streaks of times

Weathered rhymes

Body’s work spirit’s confines

Reaping inner mines

 

Extension

Protocol of names

Call number

Play me games

My mind become now number

To letter that tames

 

Ascension

Disappearance act

Bring no more

From the core

The selfhood a broken pact

Soul in fields of lore

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Raag Darbari Kanda – Pandit Pravin Godkhindi

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ctCiSThJqyg

Happy days remount

Happy days remount

20 January 2017

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Courtesy Christian Schloe

 

Two to share

Burden of knowledge

When hearts drift

In mind rift

Abundance not in spendthrift

Meaningful places

 

Attention

Span ordinary

Woollen gloves

For the doves

The spells chanting what he loves

Builder of flurry

 

Three to keep

The slope winding deep

Into grounds

Life abounds

Solitary mind resounds

Flesh of Heart weighs pounds

 

Four ensnare

Fates of lines we share

Mind of hare

Brittle bare

In the fields of wilderness

Rabbits left out care

 

Five to weep

Sand twixt toes doth seep

Time to sway

Games at play

Winners sheltered gone astray

Needle in the hay

 

Six to count

Up down paramount

Silk mitten

For the kitten

Spinning wheel we now recount

Happy days remount

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Christian Schloe

Feed the birds – Julie Andrews

Chim Chim Cheree – Mary Poppins & Bert (Julie Andrews and Dick Van Dyke)

Step in Time – Mary Poppins & Bert (Julie Andrews and Dick Van Dyke)

It’s a Jolly Holiday – Mary Poppins & Bert (Julie Andrews and Dick Van Dyke)

Let’s go fly a Kite – Julie Andrews David Tomlinson

Stay Awake – Julie Andrews

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8yC_voMY6kY

The Heart speaks softly

The Heart speaks softly

6 November 2016

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Courtesy Carlos Quevedo

 

Transient

Sentient status

Of my Heart

Pay no heed

We wallow in ridicule

The killers galore

 

The absent

A status symbol

Of unfed

Mouth to mouth

Respiratory whims fetch

Meanings to the touch

 

The starved clutch

The remnants of chaff

Falling threads

Of a thought

Wheat fleeting commodity

Bread an afterthought

 

Beauty wrought

In sinuous lines

Between peaks

Of despair

Tragedy eye opener

Liner of dark rims

 

The look skims

Bones and milky skin

The silk worn

Pieces torn

Patchwork of a body lain

On bed of roses

 

Blind eye sees

Beyond the matter

At hand waves

Splitting air

The mind never going where

The Heart speaks softly

 

Reading of the poem:

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Courtesy abstract.desktopnexus.com

Sigh – Praful

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QxBHa-obtgg

Frozen Times

Frozen Times

11 September 2016

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Courtesy Jesus on deviantart.com

 

Pitch black hurts

The sensitive eyes

Reeling move

On blackboards

Revealing tempo of groove

Distilling the whites

 

Flying kites

Hover above me

Thin slices

Of glories

They regenerate delights

Of childhood stories

 

Hold with me

My grasp on them weak

I dare not

Even speak

As the ropes pulsate with throb

Of the blackened mob

 

Body loss

Puppeteers rewind

In twin peaks

Riddled streaks

Measures of hue man eat he

Shredded dignity

 

Lines to cross

In between jigsaw

Puzzle me not

We forgot

The clear-cut lines of the law

Lesser of evils

 

Weigh me down

Burden of anvils

Beat upon

Lost forlorn

The making of the sword less

Soulful from soulless

 

Talk to me

From withering caves

Your mouth shrine

Frozen times

The words fed to the wordless

Soul forever mine

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Jesus on deviantart.com

Death is not the end – Nick Cave

Into my Arms – Nick Cave

Till the End of the World – Nick Cave

 

I draw the same lines

I draw the same lines

30 August 2016

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Courtesy Sara Helwe on deviantart.com

 

 

White paper

Suffocates my words

Like water

Thrown to herds

They drink long in blind consent

No thought of dissent

 

Amnesic

We will not find faults

Turkish baths

Take the salts

Of our pores sweating the malts

Of drunken stupor

 

Mnemonic

Technical glitches

Mind stitches

Words keyholes

Through which I had them stuttered

Bred and but uttered

 

My inks flow

Like blackened raindrops

From skies hole

To console

The children of our yearning

Born from beaten quills

 

Dissolved frills

Stark truths face the wise

To surmise

Assumption

Beating breath in consumption

Bloodied burning paths

 

My hands guide

Like a broken Tide

Every Time

On your shore

Like an ode to never more

I draw the same lines

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Keep you close – dEUS

Bad Timing – dEUS

Serpentine – dEUS

Include me Out – dEUS

The Magic Hour – dEUS

Little Arithmetics – dEUS

 

Blood pearls drip

Blood pearls drip

30 July 2016

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Courtesy Carlos Quevedo on carlosquevedoart.com

 

Polluted

Minds reek of the fear

Hearts stay clear

On the fence

Truth is the line of defense

Against night crawlers

 

The faith wanes

When the stones shatter

Window panes

My remains

Pick up the pieces of me

Oceanic grave

 

Lines tighten

The net scourging sea

Blood pearls drip

Against skin

Swallow the hurt now within

Red ink diluted

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Carlos Quevedo on carlosquevedoart.com

The Rainbow – Thomas Feiner

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vEGysFsMjMQ

Frozen chants curdling

Frozen chants curdling

24 July 2016

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Sinking ships

Into oblivion

They seep slow

Like white ink

Inverted Chinese painting

Drawing my heart’s lines

 

The winter

Crawled up in my spring

In Ending

Beginning

Unreachable changeling

Historical rhymes

 

Church bell chimes

My viscosity

Seeping through

Praying knees

The hands sunken thunderbolts

In altars’ steep wells

 

Woodcutter

My proud branches fells

I am tree

High in skies

The clouds whisper to me sighs

Of forgotten times

 

Withered leaves

Count pages’ rustle

As the ground

Gathers bunch

Avid jaws of Time now crunch

Remnants of my bark

 

They will me

Frozen chants curdling

Upon lips

Lost in pleas

The chest heaving with the wheeze

Renewed consumption

 

Reading of the poem: 

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You are my Winter – Dillon

The Unknown – Dillon

Texture of my Blood – Dillon

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5bUqCHU5eXY

Healing lines my Heart

Healing lines my Heart

10 November 2015

 

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Courtesy 01greekmythology.blogspot.com

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Walk unto altars

No sacrifice but the Grace

Of Blue requiems

 

Sing the nightingale

Twenty sparrows talked to crows

Of deserts’ pirates

 

Walk across the dunes

To the solitary grounds

Where angels wept tears

 

Enter your Temple

Within the sands of Time’s flow

Flaming bush whispers

 

Walk over the waters

Ebb and flow will set you free

Humble is the Pi

 

Breathe into the Ground

The fumes of tomorrow’s Life

As I set the Breath

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Courtesy mythische-wezens.webklik.nl

Walk into the skies

Let the airborne meet the Tunes

Silenced Chimera

 

Red was the sea’s glint

As she touched the sky-bred Flames

Breathing in the rain

 

Walk astride the Times

When her hair loose hung in grapes

Wine for the living

 

Blue was the sky’s Breath

Wings crossed the Ocean’s timelapse

A second coming

 

Walk under the stones

Crushing is the morrow’s grief

If countdown went wrong

 

More than a sole Head

Bellerophon my hand’s art

Healing lines my Heart

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Courtesy 01greekmythology.blogspot.com

Lord of the Rings – The Grace of Undómiel

Solitary Ground – Epica

This is the Time – Epica