In trailing backwards – Cinematic, Dark Folk, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

In trailing backwards – Cinematic, Dark Folk, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
21 June 2026
woman in transformation with wings standing on shards of a splintered world that has cracked open with waters surrounding her
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Born from a dream of geological collapse and rising oceans, "In Trailing Backwards" follows a journey through submerged worlds, hidden truths and strange evolutions where survival demands transformation. Part vision, part prophecy and part dream journal, this piece explores the cyclical nature of time, consciousness and becoming.

She calls me
The dark blue Mother
Her voice soft
Piercing Time
The inflexions in the rhyme
Depicting morrows

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/05/04/in-trailing-backwards/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
She calls me, the dark blue Mother
Depicting morrows to smother
Her voice so soft keeps piercing Time
pointing to inflexions in rhyme

[Verse]
The false lords, they carry baskets
Weight of grapes, slowing necks’ faucets
Craning into swirling voids stored
where the twirling Time stills no more

[Verse]
He said it slowly, undeterred
by the chattering of the herd
scattering in pain slow to leak
Silent watch as it unfolds bleak

[Verse]
They pay high, sins of the father
Price in veins that flow grey lather
Squandering remains of day dreads
when teetering crowns mistook heads

[Chorus]
We will fly when the waters wane
into skies where twin suns slow strain,
beckon to purple landscapes sealed
In trailing backwards, truth revealed

[Verse]
The waters, they surge above bridge
crashing on the outer dams’ ridge
The rims fade into crumbling sands
of Humanity’s peaks’ wetlands

[Verse]
Slaves hurry to their sunken graves
for undone evils their mouth craves
Their feet so sore from the walking
their inane dark mouths still talking

[Verse]
Three by three, they pair uneven
Their tales dead like roadkill leaden
As the blue-green graveyards thunder
sealing them forever under

[Verse]
Ingrained roots of loving solace
They bring to us Salvation’s grace
stored in the bubbles that we share
The grown gills opening to air

[Chorus]
We will fly when the waters wane
into skies where twin suns slow strain,
beckon to purple landscapes sealed
In trailing backwards, truth revealed

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic version
A cinematic interpretation emphasising atmosphere and emotional intensity.
In trailing backwards – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Dark Folk version
A folk interpretation of the song, focusing on acoustic textures and a more intimate sound that highlights the lyrical and emotional core with a touch of dark.
In trailing backwards – Dark Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
In trailing backwards – Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Dark Folk and Trip-Hop influences.

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In upward movement

In upward movement

20 May 2017

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Courtesy rassouli.com

 

Churn my wheels

Spin through my mindscapes

They translate

Change to come

Rotation a spin of Times

Creating with rhymes

 

Read through me

The books forgotten

Treasure hunt

Ill-gotten

Gold an alchemist’s project

A dream to reject

 

Morph me slow

Pictured yesterday

When we lay

In warm hay

Looking at twin suns that rose

New old to depose

 

Ring in me

Bell of home coming

When we speak

In drumming

Beats of the hearts that will learn

What in soul we yearn

 

Breathe through me

Void of the living

When we gave

Forgiving

The random web of deceit

Our soul free complete

 

Break in me

The downward spiral

When the wake

Feels viral

The morrows lead denouement

In upward movement

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Greg Spalenka on bpart.siteboard.eu

Taro – Alt-J

Matilda – Alt-J

Dissolve Me – Alt-J

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mowozlG6Abo

Rediscovered lens

Rediscovered lens

14 March 2017

first light 16 

You in me

Like eternity

Waking three

In twenty

Tugging at the coils free

Whisper to the tree

 

Bound to date

Congruence inflate

Skin is late

To translate

Venom creeping on the plate

The will to dilate

 

Shapes so queer

Popping through veneer

Veins that peer

Through the sheer

They believe it comes through fear

Knowledge of the seer

 

Leap in stance

Weather where I glance

Trail in dance

Up I prance

Wind and water holding hands

Particle that lands

 

Restored sight

Twin set in twilight

Black in white

Light in night

Wiggling through the coloured light

Shining on us bright

 

Giggling hens

Rediscovered lens

White rimmed fence

Picket whence

Quantum soup that boiled dense

Trickled from my pens

 

Reading of the poem:

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Courtesy pinterest.com

Vinegar & Salt – Hooverphonic

2 Wicky – Hooverphonic

Mad about You – Hooverphonic

 

Twining Venus Mars

Twining Venus Mars

20 January 2017

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Courtesy Christian Schloe

 

Shadows grow

Tall in the winter

Knock and knock

Who is there

Frightened cried the little hare

Is it big bad wolf

 

The light gleamed

Shadows extended

Shying day

Keen on hay

The hare asleep pretended

It was wolf at bay

 

Stories wove

Confusion’s webs strings

Three piglets

Squealed in fright

Through the thickened woods they drove

Falling out of sight

 

Hushed and mum

They gathered the hearth

Spilling Earth

And sawdust

They drove all wolves into slum

Of nothing the sum

 

Child reveals

The raging terrors

Laughter peals

Through the night

Shadows extension of light

In coin twin birthright

 

Web woven

Within waning stars

Only Heart

Keeps the Sight

Unwoven coils delight

Twining Venus Mars

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Christian Schloe

Mono No Aware – Hammock

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KjIWriDTptY

In between choices

In between choices

1 January 2017

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Courtesy humanityhealing.net

 

Suspended

Breath of the sorrow

Between chains

Hood remains

Soul that gives all forgives pains

Even red morrow

 

Truth prevails

Through the jutting nails

Of wolves mask

Relentless task

Some take knowledge to sky heights

Some fleshy delights

 

Mind hovers

In between choices

Twin voices

Of lovers

The Truth only gives Freedom

To unchained Kingdom

 

Reading of the poem: 

Balance
Courtesy pinterest.com

The Truth – Audiomachine

Red Sorrow – Audiomachine

Ice of Phoenix – Audiomachine

 

Living in Truth where shadows lie

Living in Truth where shadows lie

13 September 2016

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Courtesy mydesktopnexus.com

 

The rain poured on land of empty

Where snakes hissed on the desert sands

The feet that trod the barren lands

Danced slow to the newfound plenty

 

The sands curdled like frumenty

A tidal wave that crowds disbands

Covered all but for groping hands

Reaching out for Twenty Twenty

 

I glimpse it all with withered sigh

Twin peaks that skies then pierced anew

What breaches Truth in Truth must die

 

From waters grave we rise and fly

We turn our backs the choosing few

Living in Truth where shadows lie

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy nudagimo on deviantart.com

 

Song to the Siren – Flavia Vallega Krystael

Stella nell’Infinito – Flavia Vallega Krystael

Presenza – Flavia Vallega Krystael

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AlMZetbPVKc

Frozen Times

Frozen Times

11 September 2016

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Courtesy Jesus on deviantart.com

 

Pitch black hurts

The sensitive eyes

Reeling move

On blackboards

Revealing tempo of groove

Distilling the whites

 

Flying kites

Hover above me

Thin slices

Of glories

They regenerate delights

Of childhood stories

 

Hold with me

My grasp on them weak

I dare not

Even speak

As the ropes pulsate with throb

Of the blackened mob

 

Body loss

Puppeteers rewind

In twin peaks

Riddled streaks

Measures of hue man eat he

Shredded dignity

 

Lines to cross

In between jigsaw

Puzzle me not

We forgot

The clear-cut lines of the law

Lesser of evils

 

Weigh me down

Burden of anvils

Beat upon

Lost forlorn

The making of the sword less

Soulful from soulless

 

Talk to me

From withering caves

Your mouth shrine

Frozen times

The words fed to the wordless

Soul forever mine

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Jesus on deviantart.com

Death is not the end – Nick Cave

Into my Arms – Nick Cave

Till the End of the World – Nick Cave

 

Twenty-three

Twenty-three

29 May 2016

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Courtesy Karol Bak on pinterest.com

 

Ascension

Into red passion

Mirrored stairs

Marble squares

The chest more than bosom bares

Naked enchantment

 

Mind fragment

Lost in broken tides

Twin dances

Take chances

With the rhythm of futures

That the Heart nurtures

 

Winding tree

Gathers momentum

Twenty-three

Locked heirlooms

Fluttering in hidden rooms

As the veils unfold

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Karol Bak on pinterest.com

Tango D’Amor – Tango Jointz

In Grid – In Tango

El Unico – La Caina

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dwcMAaHQL8c

The endless waters

The endless waters

26 May 2016

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Courtesy Karol Bak on e-news.name

 

Waking up

To a sleeping world

The words hurled

Weak symbols

Unmoved zombies barely stir

Hearts lost in idols

 

The mind whirled

In between Twin Times

The spaces

Give me rhymes

With shaking tongue I ring bells

Lost their ghostly chimes

 

Mothers weep

Their withered breasts hang

Unto grounds

Lost babies

Strive through caves of Netherworld

To pick up the whiff

 

Barren wombs

Replicate nothing

The free mind

A wild thing

Creation is in the thought

The seeing of blind

 

Fear the wrath

The priests shriek strident

The breath stale

They inhale

Emblem of love they impale

Downfall of mortals

 

Breathe the love

Says the inner self

Its stillness

Warm river

Coursing through my veins shiver

The endless waters

 

Reading of the poem: 

The moment – Vargo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQJhUHxnxso

Dark castles

Dark castles

25 May 2016

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Courtesy Karol Bak on youtube.com

 

Ghostly trace

Of a million sighs

Painstaking

Bleak efforts

Toppling over heart denies

As the Earth rumbles

 

Small pittance

The remains of hay

Thrashed over

Wane thresholds

Thunder starts stomachs grumble

Craving grains of wheat

 

Dark castles

They prepare red soils

Fertilized

With the spoils

The heads to one side tumble

Precision in cut

 

Lost the day

When future was bright

The choices

Follow fork

Right or left no in between

Twin future unseen

 

Turn around

Time flows up and down

The middle

A loophole

Breathing space from where we stole

New moratorium

 

White castles

Contrasting landscapes

From bosom

Sigh escapes

For the narrow encounters

Brink of destruction

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy Karol Bak on pinterest.com

Angel of Sorrow – Arcana

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PegPCjR9-h0