The endless waters – Noir Blues, Dark Folk, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

The endless rivers – Noir Blues, Dark Folk, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
30 May 2026
woman with mind bathing in stream of consciousness which look like endless waters
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Set between the sleeping world and the hidden currents of the inner self, this poem questions the idols, fears, and authorities that shape human thought. Through images of loss, creation, and spiritual longing, it searches for a deeper source beneath doctrine and division. At its heart lies a simple invitation: to breathe love, awaken consciousness, and rediscover the living river within.

Waking up
To a sleeping world
The words hurled
Weak symbols
Unmoved zombies barely stir
Hearts lost in idols

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/05/26/the-endless-waters/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Waking up to a sleeping world
Like weak symbols the words are hurled
The unmoved zombies barely stir
hearts lost in idols they prefer

[Verse]
The mind whirled in between Twin Times
their spaces give me compressed rhymes
With shaking tongue, I ring bells fast
lost their ghostly chimes, none to last

[Chorus]
The endless waters mantelshelf
Breathe the love says the inner self
Its stillness like a warm river
coursing through my veins that shiver

[Verse]
Mothers weep, their withered breasts hang
unto grounds where lost babies twang
strive through caves of Netherworld’s riff
to pick up vanished infants’ whiff

[Verse]
Barren wombs replicate nothing
The free mind always a wild thing
Creation is in the thought mined
the heart-felt seeing of the blind

[Verse]
Fear the wrath, the priests shriek strident
downfall of mortals their talent
Breath stale from venom they inhale
Emblem of love that they impale

[Chorus]
The endless waters mantelshelf
Breathe the love says the inner self
Its stillness like a warm river
coursing through my veins that shiver

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎸 Noir Blues version
Noir Blues, smoky late-night atmosphere, slow tempo, brushed drums, sparse electric guitar, weary female vocals, melancholic blues
The endless waters –Noir Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Dark Folk version
Dark and mournful female vocals, acoustic fingerpicked guitar, low drones, ritual atmosphere, haunting mood, minimal percussion
The endless waters – Dark Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Noir Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
The endless waters –Noir Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Noir Blues, Dark Folk and Noir Trip-Hop influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

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https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2026/05/23/the-silence-noir-blues-dark-folk-dark-jazz-noir-trip-hop-versions-song-created-with-suno-my-lyrics-my-voice/

Nothing to confess

Nothing to confess

16 August 2016

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Courtesy empathy.test.bandcamp.com

 

Compiling

Going through the piles

Discarded

Yellow scraps

Crumpled paper once was wraps

Of my heart’s token

 

Unbroken

The gift lies glassy

Ribbons mess

Sheltering

The most intricate carving

From Time’s stark duress

 

Grief seekers

Point implicitly

Voiceless charge

Bow to norms

Passengers remain on Barge

While the captain drinks

 

Giddy ride

Drunken stupour straits

Mind at peace

With the twirl

Sinusoidal journey

The cracken awakes

 

The boat shakes

Imagined quivers

The wheel twirls

Tempest hurls

The rains transform the rivers

Thundering blue sea

 

Priests beckon

My frame to the keel

I reckon

Party Time

More appropriate than storms

Nothing to confess

 

Reading of the poem: 

sinus deviantart com sugarmint
Courtesy deviantart.com

Oh Lover – Rachael Yamagata ft. Ray Lamontagne

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2EO0w9i5wmA

The endless waters

The endless waters

26 May 2016

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Courtesy Karol Bak on e-news.name

 

Waking up

To a sleeping world

The words hurled

Weak symbols

Unmoved zombies barely stir

Hearts lost in idols

 

The mind whirled

In between Twin Times

The spaces

Give me rhymes

With shaking tongue I ring bells

Lost their ghostly chimes

 

Mothers weep

Their withered breasts hang

Unto grounds

Lost babies

Strive through caves of Netherworld

To pick up the whiff

 

Barren wombs

Replicate nothing

The free mind

A wild thing

Creation is in the thought

The seeing of blind

 

Fear the wrath

The priests shriek strident

The breath stale

They inhale

Emblem of love they impale

Downfall of mortals

 

Breathe the love

Says the inner self

Its stillness

Warm river

Coursing through my veins shiver

The endless waters

 

Reading of the poem: 

The moment – Vargo

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MQJhUHxnxso