The endless waters – Noir Blues, Dark Folk, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

The endless rivers – Noir Blues, Dark Folk, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
30 May 2026
woman with mind bathing in stream of consciousness which look like endless waters
Image credit: Magnific.com

## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Set between the sleeping world and the hidden currents of the inner self, this poem questions the idols, fears, and authorities that shape human thought. Through images of loss, creation, and spiritual longing, it searches for a deeper source beneath doctrine and division. At its heart lies a simple invitation: to breathe love, awaken consciousness, and rediscover the living river within.

Waking up
To a sleeping world
The words hurled
Weak symbols
Unmoved zombies barely stir
Hearts lost in idols

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/05/26/the-endless-waters/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Waking up to a sleeping world
Like weak symbols the words are hurled
The unmoved zombies barely stir
hearts lost in idols they prefer

[Verse]
The mind whirled in between Twin Times
their spaces give me compressed rhymes
With shaking tongue, I ring bells fast
lost their ghostly chimes, none to last

[Chorus]
The endless waters mantelshelf
Breathe the love says the inner self
Its stillness like a warm river
coursing through my veins that shiver

[Verse]
Mothers weep, their withered breasts hang
unto grounds where lost babies twang
strive through caves of Netherworld’s riff
to pick up vanished infants’ whiff

[Verse]
Barren wombs replicate nothing
The free mind always a wild thing
Creation is in the thought mined
the heart-felt seeing of the blind

[Verse]
Fear the wrath, the priests shriek strident
downfall of mortals their talent
Breath stale from venom they inhale
Emblem of love that they impale

[Chorus]
The endless waters mantelshelf
Breathe the love says the inner self
Its stillness like a warm river
coursing through my veins that shiver

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎸 Noir Blues version
Noir Blues, smoky late-night atmosphere, slow tempo, brushed drums, sparse electric guitar, weary female vocals, melancholic blues
The endless waters –Noir Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Dark Folk version
Dark and mournful female vocals, acoustic fingerpicked guitar, low drones, ritual atmosphere, haunting mood, minimal percussion
The endless waters – Dark Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Noir Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
The endless waters –Noir Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Noir Blues, Dark Folk and Noir Trip-Hop influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

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Flutters in the Heart

Flutters in the Heart
31 October 2025
Courtesy freepik.com


Life borders
imagination
running wild
reckless child
without confines from orders
ne’er subdued nor mild

Some lay flat
the world crushing orb
slain digits
they absorb
obedience to fake limits
to the race a rat

Some rise high
irreducible
their minds fly
into blue
Opportunities in sky
overcome trouble

In between
humble scholars walk
Their grave stance
subtle talk
born of awareness fragrance
they move in balance

I see we
mapping second Truth
in wars end
Solemn truce
images on retina
morrow’s aurora

The whispers
of the world’s others
moving through
my ribcage
they transpose into new age
flutters in the Heart

Reading of the poem:
Aurora – Dreams

Pencil drawing of a second boy

Pencil drawing of a second boy
1 April 2025
Drawing of a boy by me


I found a beautiful photograph of a boy in the database I had subscribed to and decided to try drawing him. As I mentioned before boys and men represent a particular challenge for me as I am mainly used to drawing female subjects. I thought that I should still challenge myself and try to improve my drawing of male subjects.

Again, I was drawn to the eyes and concentrated most of my attention to them. The rest of the drawing, especially the T-shirt was done with more haste and less attention to detail. I hope you like the pencil portrait all the same.

And as always, mixing the visual, sometimes the spoken but always an audio of the moment, I give you a song which I was listening to when I got the inspiration to draw the portrait.
Through The Eyes Of A Child - Aurora

The God of small Miracles

The God of small Miracles

3 November 2017

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Deconstruct

Current thought process

Unwind mind

Child remind

Inner being you will find

Playing with the clay

 

End dismay

Emerge from ashes

Old renew

Young to spew

From fountains gushing anew

The selected few

 

Embrace it

Just drop the questions

Ne’er ask why

Nor ask how

The God of small Miracles

Shimmers in the now

 

Reading of the poem: 

Something Just Like This (Lyric) – The Chainsmokers & Coldplay

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FM7MFYoylVs

Sirens sailors sink

Sirens sailors sink

21-22 September 2017

siren
Courtesy pinterest.com

 

Mossy waves

Floating petals shades

Everglades

Wonder’s point

The colours observed disjoint

Hues of red and blue

 

Colour rule

Teachings of old school

Pupil mild

Like a child

Outer quiet inner wild

Rocking the boat two

 

Ship at sea

The mind keeping low at bay

Thunderous

Waves that bring

Ship wreck to my toe nail pink

Sirens sailors sink

 

Reading of the poem: 

Sirens snow tarakini deviantart com 3
Courtesy deviantart.com

Sirens’ song

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ujAfhLLVM7E

Simply Love

Simply Love

25 June 2017

wings pinterest com 2
Courtesy pinterest.com

 

Work of Dove

Flutter of the wings

Peace that rings

In heart brings

Tidings of renewed three kings

Minds’ laden treasures

 

High above

The goal meets the fate

Death of spate

Wills create

From golden ray we instate

Breadth of our measures

 

Simply Love

Tracing in the wild

Stellar child

Bond redialed

Chosen treaty they reviled

Weak are dark’s pleasures

 

Reading of the poem: 

miracles gamma-wings deviantart com
Courtesy deviantart.com

Simply Love – Stive Morgan

Eternal Love – Stive Morgan

In Space – Stive Morgan

 

The winter bearer

The Winter bearer

24 March 2017

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Courtesy hdwallpaper.com

 

Across streams

Weaving the pathway

From Faith’s threads

Rolling heads

I pull on strings of yearning

The hearts’ chords churning

 

Into dreams

I shun dark away

Blue lighthouse

Frolicking

Twister and rain mimicking

Queen dancing for King

 

I bore Ring

Amulet of Earth

Totems wild

Bore me child

In wilderness I store her

The Winter bearer

 

Reading of the poem:

winter-mugeek-vidalondon
Courtesy google.com

Old Skin – Ólafur Arnalds ft. Arnór Dan

A Stutter – Ólafur Arnalds feat. Arnor Dan

No Other – Ólafur Arnalds feat. Arnór Dan

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xO8UdIgrEV0

Last attempt

Last attempt

7 March 2017

attempt pinterest com 5
Courtesy pinterest.com

 

Truth unkempt

Grows shrubs of the wild

Into child

No more mild

Speaking more than what they riled

Against the odds piled

 

Child unbent

Picking up pieces

Pill fleeces

Releases

Fluttering veils it eases

Broken synapses

 

Last attempt

Of old energy

Eyes bulgy

Elegy

Heart teaches analogy

Bridges effigy

 

Reading of the poem: 

Attempt pinterest com 7
Courtesy pinterest.com

Attack on Fox – Fox Capture Plan

Rising – Fox Capture Plan

Butterfly Effect – Fox Capture Plan

 

Twining Venus Mars

Twining Venus Mars

20 January 2017

christian-schloe-waiting-for-summer
Courtesy Christian Schloe

 

Shadows grow

Tall in the winter

Knock and knock

Who is there

Frightened cried the little hare

Is it big bad wolf

 

The light gleamed

Shadows extended

Shying day

Keen on hay

The hare asleep pretended

It was wolf at bay

 

Stories wove

Confusion’s webs strings

Three piglets

Squealed in fright

Through the thickened woods they drove

Falling out of sight

 

Hushed and mum

They gathered the hearth

Spilling Earth

And sawdust

They drove all wolves into slum

Of nothing the sum

 

Child reveals

The raging terrors

Laughter peals

Through the night

Shadows extension of light

In coin twin birthright

 

Web woven

Within waning stars

Only Heart

Keeps the Sight

Unwoven coils delight

Twining Venus Mars

 

Reading of the poem: 

christian-schloe-woman-mongolfiere
Courtesy Christian Schloe

Mono No Aware – Hammock

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KjIWriDTptY

The Last One Knowing

The Last One Knowing

1 January 2017

crimson fields dragon_rider_by_carlos_quevedo-d6yzuvb
Courtesy Carlos Quevedo

 

In owing

Release of the debt

Centuries

Pile old trees

The new orchards growing wild

Garden of the child

 

The eye sees

Beyond the regret

Unending

Unbending

Flames flickering extending

Uneven hearts fret

 

We walk slow

In rhythm of glow

Candles light

Ravens flight

Pathways of morrows showing

The Last One Knowing

 

Reading of the poem: 

crimsonfields hades carlos quevedo deviantart com

The Last One – Audiomachine