The endless waters – Noir Blues, Dark Folk, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)

The endless rivers – Noir Blues, Dark Folk, Noir Trip-Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
30 May 2026
woman with mind bathing in stream of consciousness which look like endless waters
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## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

Set between the sleeping world and the hidden currents of the inner self, this poem questions the idols, fears, and authorities that shape human thought. Through images of loss, creation, and spiritual longing, it searches for a deeper source beneath doctrine and division. At its heart lies a simple invitation: to breathe love, awaken consciousness, and rediscover the living river within.

Waking up
To a sleeping world
The words hurled
Weak symbols
Unmoved zombies barely stir
Hearts lost in idols

Read the full original poem here:
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/05/26/the-endless-waters/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
Waking up to a sleeping world
Like weak symbols the words are hurled
The unmoved zombies barely stir
hearts lost in idols they prefer

[Verse]
The mind whirled in between Twin Times
their spaces give me compressed rhymes
With shaking tongue, I ring bells fast
lost their ghostly chimes, none to last

[Chorus]
The endless waters mantelshelf
Breathe the love says the inner self
Its stillness like a warm river
coursing through my veins that shiver

[Verse]
Mothers weep, their withered breasts hang
unto grounds where lost babies twang
strive through caves of Netherworld’s riff
to pick up vanished infants’ whiff

[Verse]
Barren wombs replicate nothing
The free mind always a wild thing
Creation is in the thought mined
the heart-felt seeing of the blind

[Verse]
Fear the wrath, the priests shriek strident
downfall of mortals their talent
Breath stale from venom they inhale
Emblem of love that they impale

[Chorus]
The endless waters mantelshelf
Breathe the love says the inner self
Its stillness like a warm river
coursing through my veins that shiver

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎸 Noir Blues version
Noir Blues, smoky late-night atmosphere, slow tempo, brushed drums, sparse electric guitar, weary female vocals, melancholic blues
The endless waters –Noir Blues Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌾 Dark Folk version
Dark and mournful female vocals, acoustic fingerpicked guitar, low drones, ritual atmosphere, haunting mood, minimal percussion
The endless waters – Dark Folk Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)
### 🌌 Noir Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth
The endless waters –Noir Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Noir Blues, Dark Folk and Noir Trip-Hop influences.

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To touch, not divide

To touch, not divide
15 December 2022
Courtesy hdwallpapers.com
Crescent moon
Glistens on treetops
Blowing winds
Change the skies
Cloudy landscapes meet our eyes
Decanting pearl drops

Humans rise
Multiple tasks shake
Their dark ribs
As they stir
Notions of a foregone Time
While the war bells chime

The ground spills
Red waters that slide
They know not
Colours’ calls
Crimson landscapes cut our falls
To touch, not divide

Reading of the poem:
Hans Zimmer – Time

Remember from the ember

Remember from the ember

25 June 2017

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Courtesy tarakini on centerblog.net

 

Grant me strides

To edge of morrows

Taking sides

No option

In mind the heart’s adoption

A play of two rides

 

The moon spills

Honey of the thought

We forgot

In token

The chime of heart awoken

From remorseless spells

 

Delve in wells

Bathe in the red glow

Blaze to show

Under snow

Remember from the ember

Of seeds that we sow

 

Reading of the poem: 

Sirens snow tarakini centerblog net
Courtesy tarakini on centerblog.net

Bindweed above the water – Stive Morgan

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Au3xdopryg

Come meltdown

Come meltdown

25 May 2017

 

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Courtesy filmschoolrejects.com

 

Tumble down

Rabbit holes looming

They stir mind

Oust control

Flowers in soul are blooming

As we spin through Time

 

Half-wit clown

A jester of tides

He partakes

In free rides

By rules of lost land abides

Humming through my rhyme

 

Come meltdown

Of systems deplete

We will eat

Will replete

Engorgement way to defeat

Ringing of the chime

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Her name is Alice – Shinedown

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=PHQQUH0DomI

For whom the bell tolls

For whom the bell tolls

6 August 2016

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Courtesy Carlos Quevedo on carlosquevedoart.com

 

Half circle

Encroaching spires

The end near

The minds fear

The Hearts void of all desires

Purity dilates

 

Radius

Guides everlasting

Sum of two

Pi disclosed

Three quarters of doors then closed

Skewed mathematics

 

Hum in three

Voices that sing low

Be the flow

Where time stops

Wilderness now grows the crops

Of sunken gardens

 

Take my staff

Divide the waters

Birth the wells

Break the shells

Separate the wheat from chaff

Unsung mysteries

 

The skies wed

Coloured rainbows hue

Like virgins

Sparkling dew

Dying stars colours renew

In the aching void

 

Grating polls

For whom the bell tolls

Sacrifice

Relentless

Idiosyncrasy human

Their blindness endless

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Courtesy brietolga on deviantart.com

Royaume Mélancolique – Dark Sanctuary

L’être las, L’envers du miroir – Dark sanctuary

Les Mémoires Blessées – Dark Sanctuary

 

Warped Universes

Warped Universes

10 May 2015

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I see you

Wherever I go

This world fades

Meaningless

Shades of light on everglades

Blocked by murkiness

 

The hours spent

Between days and nights

Embracing

Blue outcomes

The keeper’s voice grows in hums

Of the golden bees

 

The honey

Liquefied amber

Healing drip

Within grip

Of my folded palms I sip

The nectar of life

 

Coursing light

Sweeping my body

Mutating

Inner cells

Each change stops with chime of bells

Diligent process

 

Outside me

I replicate frame

Still the same

Yet different

Each copy contains its death

Like a stray still life

 

Frozen Time

Witnesses the flights

Nights embrace

Wane daylights

The tremors of settling in

Back into within

 

We paint shades

Of imagined happenings

Minds’ tremors

Giant playgrounds

Dissonance planted in sounds

Warped Universes

 

Reading of the poem: 

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Only You – Giovanni Marradi

Dreams – Giovanni Marradi

Peacefully – Giovanni Marradi

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kyReK3YP0Rw

In your tall build revel again complete

In your tall build revel again complete

30 October 2015

 

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Courtesy thepicturesonline.com

 

I will the trees to gather leaves silent

For woodcutter could hear their rustling chimes

Yet trees bellow with chattering strident

I almost see within bed-ridden rhymes

 

Often I yearn to join the birds, migrant

Yet trees though noisy choose, I love these thymes

From all those flavours this pine tree vibrant

Of shadowed mushroom faces’ glory mimes

 

From yonder grounds tall ones preserve their bark

Low high, grey green, choose one in harmony

A will to hurt your glow for none compete

 

Look down below the winding lanes for mark

Blue red King’s colours splashed hegemony

In your tall build revel again complete

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Courtesy jordanhoffman.com

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yaNOqkDVxF8