Heart given completely- Cinematic, Indie, Trip Hop Versions | Song created with Suno (my lyrics, my voice)
20 September 2026

## 🧠 ABOUT THE PROCESS

I transformed my original poem by adapting it into lyrics that were then used for a song generated using Suno, featuring my voice. Below you’ll find part of the original poem, the revised lyrics, and the musical version.

## 📜 ORIGINAL POEM

In Heart given completely yonder story untold, an ordinary walk slips quietly beyond the boundaries of time, where the Norns stitch ancient paths and steaming waters bloom into lilies. Myth rises through their whiteness as Lilith gives way to Gods, and a heart surrendered completely crosses the floating bridges between worlds. As waters rise and old notions of sin dissolve, what begins within the familiar becomes a journey towards a place where judgement itself has been washed away.

Read the full original poem here: 
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2016/11/11/heart-given-completely-yonder-story-untold/

## ✍️ ADAPTED LYRICS

[Verse]
In circles concentric on blue shores that unwind
The mindset eccentric sees where normal is blind
Green grass for the meadows sun-fed light for the trees
Black tears for the widows that in the bleak night freeze

[Chorus]
The breath that defeats me lies within chests of cold
The angels above call loud for a hand to hold
The floating bridges relay a message so bold
Heart given completely yonder story untold

[Verse]
In the cold of the dark sad women stitch a path
where the walk in the park ends in waters of Bath
A pool glowing brighter than wings of the fairies
where lilies grow whiter than snow in the prairies

[Chorus]
The breath that defeats me lies within chests of cold
The angels above call loud for a hand to hold
The floating bridges relay a message so bold
Heart given completely yonder story untold

[Verse]
From the waters that split we will see the Gods rise
save the throne where I sit entranced by the sunrise
Forgotten all my sins as water seeps into sands
Lurches from blue oceans swallowing all the lands

[Chorus]
The breath that defeats me lies within chests of cold
The angels above call loud for a hand to hold
The floating bridges relay a message so bold
Heart given completely yonder story untold

## 🎧 SUNO SONG

Listen to how this poem transforms into music across different styles:

### 🎬 Cinematic Ambient version
Cinematic ambient with haunting female vocals, reverbed piano, plaintive cello, slow emotional build-up and immersive atmospheric soundscapes
Heart given completely – Cinematic Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

### 🌿 Ethereal Indie version
Ethereal Indie interpretation with a reflective tone, gentle piano, acoustic guitar and flute for a distinctive sound
Heart given completely – Ethereal Indie Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

### 🌌 Mystical Trip-Hop version
A hypnotic Trip-Hop interpretation blending haunting textures, introspective rhythms and atmospheric depth 
Heart given completely – Mystical Trip-Hop Song | My Original Lyrics, My Voice (Suno)

## 🎼 ABOUT THESE VERSIONS

This piece has been interpreted across multiple musical styles using Suno, exploring how the same lyrics evolve through Cinematic, Indie and Trip-Hop influences.

## 🔗 OTHER LINKS – EXPLORE MORE

You might also like: Stardust
https://geethabalvannanathan.com/2026/07/01/stardust-ethereal-chillout-cinematic-dream-pop-trip-hop-versions-song-created-with-suno-my-lyrics-my-voice/