There is more to clutter than meets the I
24 December 2015
Least
Expect
My lover
To greet a life
Blowing in a dream
Dandelions that prance
Withering in scorching flames
The core’s reduced to nothingness
Fiery wisps descending from the skies
There is more to clutter than meets the I
Forgotten, unkempt strange lullabies
Wane smiles and forced willingness
Smothering burning wings tames
Tango of minds that dance
Requiems supreme
Death in a strife
Fort giver
Reject
Beast
Chinawoman – Show me the Face
Chinawoman – Lovers are Strangers
I loved your poetry and song today. I added 10 songs to my favorite. Thank you. I hope you are having a safe and fun holiday.
Yes I am thank you. I don’t enjoy drinking so holidays are always safe for me. I’m so glad you liked the song and were able to add many to your favourites list. I hope you had a safe and fun holiday too and that we all will continue to enjoy peaceful holidays
I’m at home. Just relaxing and enjoying the quiet time.
Great, enjoy!
Absolutely beautiful
Thank you 🙂
You’re welcome x
Fantastic. I love your reference to Tango. You’ve got this perfected. I take my hat off to you, again. Marvellous.
Thank you so much Annie. I love tango. It is one of my favourite (if not the favourite) dances and I have been at it since 2006. It is always on my mind
I remembered. I love it but sadly, I don’t do it anymore. So so beautiful.
love this, Geetha. You really are becoming a expert with this style! I think it very much suits your poetry!
What a lovely compliment but then again you are the knight of poetry right :)? I would not call myself an expert because I only found the form yesterday but I really like it a lot and I guess soon it will start flowing too. For nowI have had to work my flow by adding or reducing words to match the count
This is a gorgeous etheree, Geetha!
Thank you Thomas, I’m glad you like it 🙂
I do, my friend…:)
oh, and you are welcome 😀
🙂
not as eloquent as yours, but here’s an Etheree i wrote some tome ago 🙂
https://hooklineandinkwell.wordpress.com/2015/10/30/fall-an-etheree/
I just read it, really lovely!
Thank you!