The ticks clung on hard 7 April 2021
She was bedraggled The fleas were like a waistcoat spreading around her She smoothed her hands down over a sea of darkness It caused her to sneeze The ticks clung on hard Waves of red and black coloured points where some pests died Reading of the poem:
NEUROQ - External Intention
Written in the context of Ronovan writes Haiku challenge using the words “fleas”, “sneeze” and their synonyms. For more information and to read other poets collaboration, follow the link here
Ronovan Writes #Weekly #Haiku #Poetry Prompt #Challenge 352 FLEAS and Sneeze. | ronovanwrites
wow….has a deep meaning…
Thank you Ramya
Fate of flea, I was just imagining the Portrait!!
could feel the poem, thank god, you imagined flea, not man !! Fear !
well written, 👌👌
Thank you Akshay for reading and your interesting comment
Wonderful words and you have the capacity to always find a suitable illustration!
Thank you Malkie 🙂
Very well done. The waistcoat is a particularly good image
Thank you Derrick 🙂