Talk to me of bliss
15 March 2015
Talk to me of bliss
Where the trees welcome the birds
Homecoming branches
Talk to me of bliss
When the waves don’t break on shore
Pursuing moonlight
Talk to me of bliss
Of why the ants lift castles
Heavier than lives
Talk to me of bliss
Of how the nightmares recede
When our footsteps join
Talk to me of bliss
Because this is how I start
To carve my grammar
Talk to me of bliss
Until I know not the lines
That fuse me in you
I will teach you words
To express inner glories
In letters of sheen
I will teach you words
Which cobblers use to patch souls
Their hands keen full stops
I will teach you words
Oozing out the emptiness
With weight of meaning
I will teach you words
Of when innocence danced light
In pathways of age
I will teach you words
Of how you complete my dreams
With broken phrases
I will teach you words
Of the odd one out who found
Little worlds of bliss
Reading of the poem:
A Quiet Conversation – Bliss
I absolutely adored that last stanza. This was so good.
Thank you Andrew. Yes, the odd one out always finds perfect match in worlds of bliss. I always believe communication is key
Wonderful poem, Such lovely words, glad John shared it so I found your blog.
Thank you Janell 🙂
Reblogged this on johncoyote and commented:
Amazing written and verbal poetry. Please listen and read her outstanding poetry.
Thank you for sharing my friend 🙂
A needed reblogged. More people need to read your work.
Amazing verbal and written poetry. A beautiful journey into your words and thoughts.
Thank you John 🙂
You are welcome Geetha.
love the repetition! What a powerful poem. “I will teach you words
Of how you complete my dreams
With broken phrases” that line caught me. it is such a beautiful sentiment! 🙂
Thank you Melinda. There is that special connection when someone always completes your sentences regarding real life occurrences. It becomes even more special when someone is able to complete your thoughts about your dreams.
You’re welcome 😉 someday I would love to experience that special connection 🙂
I believe when you are open to it and not worried about it, you experience it.
I am open to it and not worried about it. So I guess it’ll show up soon? 😉
According to the law of the Universe it should 😉
😀
How we listen and how we respond. Love this, Geetha!!
Thank you Eric. Communication is such a central element in relationships. Sadly most take it too lightly
Beautiful. I had a particularly stressful morning and I listened to this poem, it calmed me and made me smile, a dreamer`s smile. You are a true poet.
Thank you Adele. What a beautiful compliment and I am glad the poem calmed you and made you smile 🙂
Great images bringing the subject alive
Thank you Derrick 🙂
Lovely. 💕
Thank you Sarah 🙂
VERY NICE
Thank you Naren